Comment from Sysop912
I'm sorry, but the waterfall is lost for the foliage let alone the barely visible bridge, the entire image is leaning to the left (water usually should be presented when falling as straight down), nd what you have chosen to include in the foreground doesn't really contain anything to hold the viewers interest.
I'm not saying this to be mean, it's just that this image looks like a quick snapshot that was perhaps a little rushed.
If you are able to revisit this place, possibly when the sun is shining onto the falls, I would suggest moving close to the base of the first set of visible stairs, which would rid you of those trees, and increase the details and visibility of the bridge and falls.
Brian.

 Comment Written 12-May-2004

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reply by the author on 13-May-2004

I'm going back to the falls again in May. I'm going to improve on a full clear shot at the bridge. the
reason why my camera shot wasn't clear because vistor center had the middle of the side walk
fence in. but this time I'm going to get a clear camera shot.

Comment from Casteel
This looks as though it is a beautiful scene although it could use some sharpening to make the image stand out some more. The contrast is nice with the natural light and the color seems to be nicely caught.

 Comment Written 12-May-2004

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reply by the author on 12-May-2004

Thank you

Comment from Papa
Alonzo, I am afraid I find little in this photograph to recommend it. In my view the composition is poor and your perspective not well chosen. And, the exposure is not good. The area does look like it had possibilities, but somehow the combination of elements in this image just doesn't seem to me to work.
Peace, Papa

 Comment Written 12-May-2004

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reply by the author on 12-May-2004

I know that the picture didn't turned out to good from your eyes
due to the film and camera I was using. But, I'm going to work
harder on the week points, so the picture can be much clear.
Thank you for you commits.

reply by the author on 12-May-2004

I know that the picture didn't turned out to good from your eyes
due to the film and camera I was using. But, I'm going to work
harder on the week points, so the picture can be much clear.
Thank you for you commits.

Comment from sxie
It is a nice work,
I like the way water cascaded down continously and connected to the stairs which makes the steps into part of the waterfall.
However, the tree trunks are not distinct from their background

 Comment Written 12-May-2004

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reply by the author on 12-May-2004

Thank you

Comment from Ms Vegas Eyes
The composition is very well done. The lighting is strong and dramatic. The colors are beautiful. This is a very nice photograph. It does seem a bit crooked though.

 Comment Written 12-May-2004

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reply by the author on 12-May-2004

Thank you