Comment from Sysop912
Interesting rendering here, I like the combination of colours and pencil, it kind of lends thought of a world about to be filled with colour and life. Good work.
Brian

 Comment Written 13-May-2004

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reply by the author on 13-May-2004

Thank you, that is the effect I was going for!

Comment from Casteel
I am not quite sure why this picture does not appeal to me much, I find the detail especially in the womans hair and face to be not well done alot of detail that could be there is missing. It could use some more detail through out for the type of picture it is. This picture although has meaning for a lot of people I am sure and is a very good idea and excellent way to express yourself :)

 Comment Written 13-May-2004

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reply by the author on 13-May-2004

Thank you for reviewing!

Comment from Tracymax
it's very nice, but something is lacking.
Maybe the drops of colors are not to defined...
The idea is very good and all together I like it

 Comment Written 13-May-2004

Comment from Richard
I love the concept. The composition is very nice. You just need to give it some more work. Right now it is realy at the concept level. It will be a great piece if you take it all the way. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

 Comment Written 13-May-2004

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reply by the author on 13-May-2004

Well, I actually don't have a scanner, so this is a digital photo of it, and for some reason, I can never get pencil to look right with a camera. very poor quality, and it lost a lot of detail.