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It's a cyborg8 total reviews
Comment from Texas Rose
This is a lot better than the last one.
Another question, how can a cyborg
be human. Are they not machines?
The etching could use a little clean up
but other than that this is a good drawing.
Good luck.
T Rose
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2004
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This is a lot better than the last one.
Another question, how can a cyborg
be human. Are they not machines?
The etching could use a little clean up
but other than that this is a good drawing.
Good luck.
T Rose
Comment Written 17-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2004
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The data of a person's self meaning the choices you would make your mermory etc.............LIKE ROBO COP
Comment from saffron_factor
You have a natural talent!
The face is interesting and so is the gun.
Where is the space for inserting the fingers?
The explosives box needs work.
It does not need to be labelled. It should be apparent.
The hands need major work.
The helmet is cool.
The shading and in fact the whole sketch looks pre-mature to me.
You have a long way to go but i am sure u will get there very soon!
Best wishes!
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You have a natural talent!
The face is interesting and so is the gun.
Where is the space for inserting the fingers?
The explosives box needs work.
It does not need to be labelled. It should be apparent.
The hands need major work.
The helmet is cool.
The shading and in fact the whole sketch looks pre-mature to me.
You have a long way to go but i am sure u will get there very soon!
Best wishes!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2004
Comment from eslwinshot
a very fine drawing, im just wondering about the text on the upper part, is that an arabic text? i saw your other works, they are all very good.
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a very fine drawing, im just wondering about the text on the upper part, is that an arabic text? i saw your other works, they are all very good.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2004
Comment from Wolfdancer13
It's apparent you have a natural ability. This is an impressive sketch with strong lines of proportionment, some depth and texture. The gun was nicely detailed with the hand gripping it. Very interesting face on this cyborg. This had a nice creative flow to it.
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It's apparent you have a natural ability. This is an impressive sketch with strong lines of proportionment, some depth and texture. The gun was nicely detailed with the hand gripping it. Very interesting face on this cyborg. This had a nice creative flow to it.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2004
Comment from Lpspider
You can deffately scethch. need to work on hands. there are no holes!? Would like to see more of what you can do, so show us what you got.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2004
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You can deffately scethch. need to work on hands. there are no holes!? Would like to see more of what you can do, so show us what you got.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2004
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I'll try
Comment from emotif
Yes, you certainly can sketch, and am interested to see what you can do when you go all out. The word 'explosives' on the box, though self explanatory , could have been more subtle. You are nearly there! best wishes.
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2004
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Yes, you certainly can sketch, and am interested to see what you can do when you go all out. The word 'explosives' on the box, though self explanatory , could have been more subtle. You are nearly there! best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2004
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I know I really have alot to learn and long way to go before I get where I want.
Comment from Whisper
It looks unfinished. The pose is fine, and so is the face. The gun doesn't look quite right though. There is no hole for the fingers, they're just there.
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It looks unfinished. The pose is fine, and so is the face. The gun doesn't look quite right though. There is no hole for the fingers, they're just there.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2004
Comment from Tillantria
This is an excellent preliminary sketch before drawing the real deal. As it stands now, I don't get a sense of completion from it. I recommend taking this sketch and finishing it.
But to be honest, I would have waited before posting this.
~Tillie
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This is an excellent preliminary sketch before drawing the real deal. As it stands now, I don't get a sense of completion from it. I recommend taking this sketch and finishing it.
But to be honest, I would have waited before posting this.
~Tillie
Comment Written 16-Apr-2004
