I'll take your heart
Never trust a robot girl11 total reviews
Comment from mp3004
Whoa this is kinda cool. I like it. I love the hands with the blood. I hope you work on your technical skills because you have a nice vision. I wish it was smaller so I could see it better.
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Whoa this is kinda cool. I like it. I love the hands with the blood. I hope you work on your technical skills because you have a nice vision. I wish it was smaller so I could see it better.
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2004
Comment from Casteel
I dont really see much to this, I definately would not be scared of my daughter viewing it as it is hard to tell what exactly the picture is portraying.
I could almost see it as an alien with a cane.
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I dont really see much to this, I definately would not be scared of my daughter viewing it as it is hard to tell what exactly the picture is portraying.
I could almost see it as an alien with a cane.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2004
Comment from Texas Rose
I had to give this a two star rating because I just can't bring myself to
give it a one star. First of all, I could not get a total picture because it is
way to stretched out. How in the heck did you get it to post this huge?
Second, did she cut her thumb off and is bleeding? Then it looks like she cut her wrist. Call me crazy but ............. I will leave it at that. That sentence is like your drawing, unfinished. But that is my opinion only.
Another thing that puzzled me was your
note.
***** It made of a hardy plastic. This makes it very flexible. Like a rat. *****
>> It's << made of a >> hard << plastic. This makes it very flexible. Like a rat.
Excuse me, how can a hard plastic be flexible like a rat? Are you talking about a rubber rat or a real one?
This drawing need major work. Also you need to watch how you spell words in you notes to the public.
I want >> wanted << to draw a different andriod.
I kinda was think >> thinking << of a covet >> is this suppose to be corvette? It >> it's << not metel >> metal << like the rest of >> the << car, >> cars. << neither is this machines. >> you don't need this last part. End your sentence with >> rest of the cars. << You are stumbling over yourself and saying the same thing twice. You already stated it is not metal like the rest of the cars. No need for >> neither is this machine. It >> It's << made of a hardy >> hard << plastic. This makes it very flexible. Like a rat.
If you do an edit please PM me and I will review it again.
Good luck.
T Rose
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I had to give this a two star rating because I just can't bring myself to
give it a one star. First of all, I could not get a total picture because it is
way to stretched out. How in the heck did you get it to post this huge?
Second, did she cut her thumb off and is bleeding? Then it looks like she cut her wrist. Call me crazy but ............. I will leave it at that. That sentence is like your drawing, unfinished. But that is my opinion only.
Another thing that puzzled me was your
note.
***** It made of a hardy plastic. This makes it very flexible. Like a rat. *****
>> It's << made of a >> hard << plastic. This makes it very flexible. Like a rat.
Excuse me, how can a hard plastic be flexible like a rat? Are you talking about a rubber rat or a real one?
This drawing need major work. Also you need to watch how you spell words in you notes to the public.
I want >> wanted << to draw a different andriod.
I kinda was think >> thinking << of a covet >> is this suppose to be corvette? It >> it's << not metel >> metal << like the rest of >> the << car, >> cars. << neither is this machines. >> you don't need this last part. End your sentence with >> rest of the cars. << You are stumbling over yourself and saying the same thing twice. You already stated it is not metal like the rest of the cars. No need for >> neither is this machine. It >> It's << made of a hardy >> hard << plastic. This makes it very flexible. Like a rat.
If you do an edit please PM me and I will review it again.
Good luck.
T Rose
Comment Written 17-Apr-2004
Comment from saffron_factor
Violence?
I cannot even smell a hint of it.
Looks like your hands couldn't keep up with the speed of your imagination!
It looks unfinished and needs resizing.
The red...whatever it is, perhaps suggests of violence.
The face is a good job, though!
You have potential.
You can do a lot better than this, with some more patience and discipline.
Keep working.
Best Wishes!
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Violence?
I cannot even smell a hint of it.
Looks like your hands couldn't keep up with the speed of your imagination!
It looks unfinished and needs resizing.
The red...whatever it is, perhaps suggests of violence.
The face is a good job, though!
You have potential.
You can do a lot better than this, with some more patience and discipline.
Keep working.
Best Wishes!
Comment Written 17-Apr-2004
Comment from eslwinshot
well quite an intriguing and intersting image, the red swords really shows a violence here, the drawin is very simple and the message is there. congrats.
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well quite an intriguing and intersting image, the red swords really shows a violence here, the drawin is very simple and the message is there. congrats.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2004
Comment from emotif
I didn't see a high level of violence in this drawing attempt. I did see a lot of blank space. Have no idea what you were trying to depict, though read your notes at the end. Best wishes anyway
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I didn't see a high level of violence in this drawing attempt. I did see a lot of blank space. Have no idea what you were trying to depict, though read your notes at the end. Best wishes anyway
Comment Written 17-Apr-2004
Comment from Wolfdancer13
This seems unfinished. With resizing, so the page captures up front what you drew and added detail I think you could truly bring out the potential you have established in the face of your android.
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This seems unfinished. With resizing, so the page captures up front what you drew and added detail I think you could truly bring out the potential you have established in the face of your android.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2004
Comment from Lpspider
PLEASE don't be discouraged due to my rating. I really don't mean to. BUt this nedds a lot of work. what are the red things? need more seems unfinished.
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2004
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PLEASE don't be discouraged due to my rating. I really don't mean to. BUt this nedds a lot of work. what are the red things? need more seems unfinished.
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2004
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Thank you for the contructive comment
Comment from stonesage
This drawing has a rushed feeling to it and the way it sits now it feels unfinished. And the red things in her/its hands have no way of being identified.
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This drawing has a rushed feeling to it and the way it sits now it feels unfinished. And the red things in her/its hands have no way of being identified.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2004
Comment from Tillantria
The subject's features are not well defined in this sketch. The picture is also way too big and the subject itself hard to locate within all the negative space. Cropping and resizing this piece will ultimately help your rating (a little,) but this sketch is not that good. If the first work that I saw of yours smacked of being unfinished then this one is ten times worse.
~Tillie
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2004
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The subject's features are not well defined in this sketch. The picture is also way too big and the subject itself hard to locate within all the negative space. Cropping and resizing this piece will ultimately help your rating (a little,) but this sketch is not that good. If the first work that I saw of yours smacked of being unfinished then this one is ten times worse.
~Tillie
Comment Written 16-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2004
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Thank you for that construtive comment