Comment from Lucien van Oosten
Nice idea, like the simple nature of the image. I think however that the ocean needs a little of the blue from the shadow, make the composition more, or give it better color harmony. I'm also thinking the ball face needs some shadows and highlights to make it feel more round, and not look so flat, like a disk. Nice idea needs some more work.

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009

Thank you for your detailed look at my artwork and for your helpful comments.

VMarguarite

Comment from ahsanzia
LOL this is so cute. Love the smily face rolling in the water and the shadow is just perfect. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

Initial Impact:5
Creativity:4
Presentation:5
Center of Interest:5
Lighting:5
Story Telling:5
Technical Skills:5
Technique:5
Color Harmony/contrast:5

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009

Thank you for your thorough and objective review of my digital creation of art.

VMarguarite

Comment from bedo92000
Great job with this. The water looks very good. I like the placement of the smiley face on the ball. Great job with the shadow. Good story telling ability. thanks for sharing.

~emily

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2009

I am very pleased with your high-rated opinion of my artwork. Thank You.

Vernonette Marguarite