Comment from Stanbo
I like your work it shows imagination and skill. You did a really great job drawing this piece. Very impressive indeed

 Comment Written 20-May-2004

Comment from simpledlte
Well I was wondering about the layout but if you were assigned to do this it makes more sense. Very good use of shading and colored pencils. Proportion is good. Your perspective lines could be more precise, they are off a little.

 Comment Written 16-May-2004

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reply by the author on 16-May-2004

I drew this after we learned one point perspective...I'm only 22 so I have plenty of time to practice. Thanks for your advice.

Comment from Casteel
The use of purple for shadow was wonderful, and the paperclip is great and the scissors turned out excellent, although one thing that does not sit right is the box, the lines making it into a box seem off, making the box look like it is angled there for distorting the image. The contrast is nice adding some feel to the project. :)

 Comment Written 16-May-2004

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reply by the author on 16-May-2004

How should I make the box sit right?

reply by Casteel on 16-May-2004

lift the line on the front of the box, up a little going to the righ, which will make the box look more like a box. :)

Comment from missingangel
I like how you used the purple for the shading effect, and why not center the box, i noticed the right hand corner missing, anyways its still very nice, i commend you on a job well done

 Comment Written 16-May-2004

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reply by the author on 16-May-2004

Sometimes I like my art to roll off the page...I think it adds interest. Thank you though!