Comment from astepbeyond
Very good. Portraits are hard and this look like you have a likeness. Is this a fast sketch, or a finished drawing. I hope you paint, and take yourself seriously as an artist. You are very good

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2004

Comment from jofusworld
I can't be nearly as critical over this piece since I don't really know the band at all... Though, you still show a problem with your proportions. If you want some basic tips just send me a private message... That is partly what this site is about... Helping each other grow as artists.

 Comment Written 16-May-2004

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reply by the author on 17-May-2004

hmm, thanks. I did have a lot of trouble with the proportions. Though im pretty sure it because I find drawing famous people hard to do,so i might work on it a little more. thanks for the advice

Comment from Joluany
this is a very good drawing. the detail and the shading could be a little better especially on the clothing...keep up the good work.......

 Comment Written 16-May-2004

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reply by the author on 17-May-2004

thanks! ill keep that in mind!

Comment from kraz
not bad good likeness keep practising and youll have it perfect dude
you need to learn how to flow your shading
your shading goes every which at the moment
and maybe put some back ground in it to fill ya paper
but i think its a damb good start keep working on this peice use ya rubber no one said it was illegal to use it
u do have some talent keep practisig and dont give up

 Comment Written 16-May-2004

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reply by the author on 17-May-2004

thanks. ill try more on the shading, seeing as thats what needs the most work