Comment from Stanbo
Very nice job but it almost looks like there is a bullet hole in the middle of the heart giving it a broken heart type of a look. You have done a really nice job

 Comment Written 20-May-2004

Comment from kraz
this totally suits the topic and the poem is heart felt i love poetry and poetry with art is awesome it felt like you are in love deeply but are scared to loose this person but thats just my take on it i got that from the way you drew your heart id like to see more of your poem style art maybe even a book

 Comment Written 16-May-2004

Comment from jofusworld
Very touching piece... I love the feeling of distress you give in the splattered look of the heart and the swirls... Yet, the care taken in the handwriting shows the care taken to express your love... Very moving piece.. Well, done!!!

 Comment Written 16-May-2004

Comment from Papa
beinspired, while I admire the imaginative and creative idea, I find the weak colour and fractured design of the heart unappealing, especially when accompanied by those black unattractive swirls.
Peace, Papa

 Comment Written 16-May-2004

Comment from Joluany
Wow...........This looks very violent and distorted. Can't really see what the saying is..But you are on the right track of art....good job

 Comment Written 16-May-2004