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peace after a war19 total reviews
Comment from Stanbo
This is a beautiful and symbolic work. You have captured the true loss in war or in other events. excellent work I am looking forward to seeing more of your work
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This is a beautiful and symbolic work. You have captured the true loss in war or in other events. excellent work I am looking forward to seeing more of your work
Comment Written 25-May-2004
Comment from calamity
Your picture certainly does convey a lot of emotion mostly sadness and grief. I'm not sure I fully understand it but you do have talent.
reply by the author on 24-May-2004
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Your picture certainly does convey a lot of emotion mostly sadness and grief. I'm not sure I fully understand it but you do have talent.
Comment Written 23-May-2004
reply by the author on 24-May-2004
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the peice is about mother earths saddness over what we r doin to her earth
Comment from Cricket
It's good, you show some talent there, maybe try looking at some books on anatomy...the proportions are off quite a bit and the detailing in the face needs some work. Keep drawing...practice makes perfect.
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It's good, you show some talent there, maybe try looking at some books on anatomy...the proportions are off quite a bit and the detailing in the face needs some work. Keep drawing...practice makes perfect.
Comment Written 23-May-2004
Comment from Draugr
The pic is good it could use some more details. Maybe also enhance it with some contrast to really bring out your subject. Your scanner may have distorted it.
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The pic is good it could use some more details. Maybe also enhance it with some contrast to really bring out your subject. Your scanner may have distorted it.
Comment Written 23-May-2004
Comment from phoenixgroup
I think the drawing is very true. Only tears are left and this depicts that well. The body image in front shows the true human aspect of war and it's disregard for life.
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I think the drawing is very true. Only tears are left and this depicts that well. The body image in front shows the true human aspect of war and it's disregard for life.
Comment Written 19-May-2004
Comment from timloco
The values are all the same or really close. The darks need to be darker, try using a softer lead or charcoal for the shadows. Other than that it's evocative of sadness, so if that's what you've meant to do you've done it.
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The values are all the same or really close. The darks need to be darker, try using a softer lead or charcoal for the shadows. Other than that it's evocative of sadness, so if that's what you've meant to do you've done it.
Comment Written 19-May-2004
Comment from Sarastar16
This is wonderful. I love the shading. This is so unique. I don't know what to say. All I can say is that I love it! You've got somehthing in your mind and your portraying it through this drawing which is gorgeous.
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This is wonderful. I love the shading. This is so unique. I don't know what to say. All I can say is that I love it! You've got somehthing in your mind and your portraying it through this drawing which is gorgeous.
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Comment Written 18-May-2004
Comment from jaymama
This is very interesting. It leaves a lot to the imagination. The shading and sketching is good think you could add a little color and it would change the whole thing. I don't know if it will change it for the better or wore.
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This is very interesting. It leaves a lot to the imagination. The shading and sketching is good think you could add a little color and it would change the whole thing. I don't know if it will change it for the better or wore.
Comment Written 18-May-2004
Comment from Goya
The sketch itself has a potential.
Yet, I don't understand why she is so "turned apart".
Why does she have a tattoo?
It seems you didn't think very carefully about the details.
Cheers.
reply by the author on 18-May-2004
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The sketch itself has a potential.
Yet, I don't understand why she is so "turned apart".
Why does she have a tattoo?
It seems you didn't think very carefully about the details.
Cheers.
Comment Written 18-May-2004
reply by the author on 18-May-2004
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she is sad because she is mother earth and look what we have done to her earth and the tatt is to symbolise the fire and earth and her tear is water and her hair is wind
Comment from Joluany
This is a very well done in the concept sence. A little less with the shading and more detail in her arms. A little more detail in the background to include the story behind the photo...don't really get that feel when you look at the drawing. Keep up the great work...You have the talent....
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This is a very well done in the concept sence. A little less with the shading and more detail in her arms. A little more detail in the background to include the story behind the photo...don't really get that feel when you look at the drawing. Keep up the great work...You have the talent....
Comment Written 18-May-2004