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peace after a war19 total reviews
Comment from simpledlte
Good use of symbolism in this drawing. I guess eveything is marked after a war. Highly political expression. Good work.
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Good use of symbolism in this drawing. I guess eveything is marked after a war. Highly political expression. Good work.
Comment Written 18-May-2004
Comment from Casteel
This is a beautiful sketch with lots of shadowing maybe a little to much in places, detail in general is wonderful , although I find that her arms seem to be a little akward looking.
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This is a beautiful sketch with lots of shadowing maybe a little to much in places, detail in general is wonderful , although I find that her arms seem to be a little akward looking.
Comment Written 18-May-2004
Comment from Papa
kraz, this work appears to me to be well drawn for the most part, but there are several doubtful elements. For instance, I think the tears are over done. What is that on her back? A tattoo? And, there is not enough detail in the background, at least in my view. Nevertheless, a good drawing.
Peace, Papa
reply by the author on 18-May-2004
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kraz, this work appears to me to be well drawn for the most part, but there are several doubtful elements. For instance, I think the tears are over done. What is that on her back? A tattoo? And, there is not enough detail in the background, at least in my view. Nevertheless, a good drawing.
Peace, Papa
Comment Written 17-May-2004
reply by the author on 18-May-2004
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it is just a work in progress i want to do a whole theme on mother earth and her taking her earth back in the end this is my start
Comment from shutterbug502
Good shadowing. You really show the womans pain in this, I think I can relate to her. the background could have been a little clearer. Very nice drawing
reply by the author on 18-May-2004
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Good shadowing. You really show the womans pain in this, I think I can relate to her. the background could have been a little clearer. Very nice drawing
Comment Written 17-May-2004
reply by the author on 18-May-2004
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im still working on this but the idea is that she is mother earth and she is so sad for her earth that we have destroyed im actually doing a whole story on this subject and ends with her taking it all back
Comment from ivstix
Very nice pencil drawing. You can see and experience her pain. Image is sharp and simple yet gets your point across. well done
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Very nice pencil drawing. You can see and experience her pain. Image is sharp and simple yet gets your point across. well done
Comment Written 17-May-2004
Comment from Ms Vegas Eyes
the overall composition is okay. not quite sure what is going on with the sky. the details on the woman are alright. the shading is good. the overall drawing needs more details.
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the overall composition is okay. not quite sure what is going on with the sky. the details on the woman are alright. the shading is good. the overall drawing needs more details.
Comment Written 17-May-2004
Comment from Sysop912
Nice strokes, great shading, a sketch yes, but also with abstract suggestions leaving the viewer open to suggestion and finding their own meaning. Well done.
Brian
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Nice strokes, great shading, a sketch yes, but also with abstract suggestions leaving the viewer open to suggestion and finding their own meaning. Well done.
Brian
Comment Written 17-May-2004
Comment from L E Lench
I think this is truely wonderful, the feeling is overwhelming, I think it would work well with some pastels thrown in as well. Nice work
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I think this is truely wonderful, the feeling is overwhelming, I think it would work well with some pastels thrown in as well. Nice work
Comment Written 17-May-2004
Comment from kcat
Very expressive, but the drawing needs something else, in my opinion. It comes off more as a doodle or a rough sketch than a finished work of art. This would make a great painting.
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reply by the author on 17-May-2004
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Very expressive, but the drawing needs something else, in my opinion. It comes off more as a doodle or a rough sketch than a finished work of art. This would make a great painting.
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Comment Written 17-May-2004
reply by the author on 17-May-2004
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thanx yeah it is just a rough sketch and i want to paint it there is more i want to add but there is only so much i kan say with pencil