Comment from STEFFI
This is a great entry for the Black and White challenge!
It is so funny. A little bit painful
but ultimately funny. In your own prison... Very creative and cool image! Well done!
STEFFI

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2009

Comment from sandysartstudio
Hi, I sat and look and picked your story before I read your write up. Great title. How many people put themselves behind bars in life by their own doing (not jail) but a jail to them. A lot of them blame everyone else. This is so well done. A lot of thought has gone into this. very well designed, great feeling and story telling. I like the black and white image as that is how life is black or white on in betweens. A 10 from me. Sandy

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2009

Comment from Nana Chelle
Very cute and creative. Best of luck to you in the contest and thank you so much for sharing.

Initial impact 5
Creativity of presentation 5
Color Harmony 5
Center of Interest 5
Technical Excellence 5
Technique 5
Story Telling Ability 5
Lighting 5


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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2009

Comment from Eternal Beauty
Very funny. I like the black and white. I get the story. Nice detail. I like how you blurred the two horizontal bars. There is creativity here. It get your interest. Good job.

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Sep-2009

Thank you, EB!! All the bars were created with gradients in the "lighten" layer mode, that's why the appear as they do. I didn't intentionally blur them. Again, thank you.