Comment from Papa
likaut, this is a fine photograph, with good exposure and focus. It appears somehwat posed and unnatural, however, with the boy looking directly at the camera, rather than concentrating on that delicious looking watermelon. I also find the bacground to be unappealing. Nonetheless, this is s good shot.
Peace, Papa

 Comment Written 19-May-2004

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reply by the author on 20-May-2004

Thanks can I redo the pic or do I just leave iy as is?

Comment from brokelizard
This may do better with a black background and cropped more around your subject, right now the background seems a bit distracting, with a black background, his eyes and the color of the watermelon will stand out brilliantly. Thanks.

 Comment Written 19-May-2004

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reply by the author on 20-May-2004

Thanks I am new at this but I love taking Pics!

Comment from Diane
Very nice. I like close up photos of kids faces but they should be doing something not just looking into the camera. Your photo is nice because it does tell a story. The viewer could be reminded about summer, a family picnic etc. Color is bright, picture is framed well. Well done.

 Comment Written 19-May-2004

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reply by the author on 20-May-2004

Thanks! I love some of the shots I get lucky taking some!

Comment from flondo
great candid shot. A litle tweaking in photoshop would help with the colour correction and maybe distort or dispose of the unfortunately distracting background.

 Comment Written 19-May-2004

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reply by the author on 20-May-2004

Thanks I love to take Pics but I am no pro thats for sure!