Comment from Paulette
Awesome initial impact. Center of interest well defined. Artistic composition and creative presentation. Good story telling ability. Well done.

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 Comment Written 22-Oct-2009

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2009

Thank you so much for the great review, Paulette!! :)