Comment from phoenixgroup
Very good photo. I think it would have been a bit more enhanced if it were a little further back. While it captures details and the child is cute, it's just really close.

 Comment Written 20-May-2004

Comment from Cricket
Beautiful baby. Great family picture and special to you I'm sure. For art however need to work on the framing and the mood of the photo. Keep shooting!

 Comment Written 20-May-2004

Comment from floridaboy
Good subject, but everything else needs work. The lighting is almost nonexistent, giving a grainy, boring texture to the work. The focal point is the white clothing, it should be the face of the baby. Put the baby's eyes, nose or mouth in the center of the photo, whatever is the most interesting. Add some color either in the background or in what the child is wearing.

 Comment Written 20-May-2004

Comment from rebeld
cutie. the black and white is a nice touch. most baby pictures are in color, but i do like the look of B&W. it lets you see all of the creases in the hands very well.

 Comment Written 20-May-2004

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reply by the author on 20-May-2004

Thankyou!