Falcon Trainer
This was sketched from a photograph in a magazine.12 total reviews
Comment from KellsBells
Pretty good piece of drawing. Very realistic.
Not my type of artwork but I wish I could draw like that. His has seems to be out of place a bit. Maybe a bit darker would have been better.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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Pretty good piece of drawing. Very realistic.
Not my type of artwork but I wish I could draw like that. His has seems to be out of place a bit. Maybe a bit darker would have been better.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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Thank you... sorry for not replying for so long been busy with work. saw ur comment on 22 apr...today
Comment from saffron_factor
The sepia background is lovely.
The bird is well drawn but a bit out of proportion for the man.
The face of the man could use some work and his left foot too.
The head gear is noot very clear, is it?
Very well done!
Aarthi
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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The sepia background is lovely.
The bird is well drawn but a bit out of proportion for the man.
The face of the man could use some work and his left foot too.
The head gear is noot very clear, is it?
Very well done!
Aarthi
Comment Written 17-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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Thank you... sorry for not replying for so long been busy with work. saw ur comment on 22 apr...today
Comment from emotif
Is a good sketch and the only thing I can find wrong with it is the perspective as the bird is too big for the man, but then again, it might be a magic bird? Anyway, bet wishes.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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Is a good sketch and the only thing I can find wrong with it is the perspective as the bird is too big for the man, but then again, it might be a magic bird? Anyway, bet wishes.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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Thank you... sorry for not replying for so long been busy with work. saw ur comment on 22 apr...today
Comment from Whisper
I like the detail in the clothes and feathers. The proportion on the falcon doesn't seam quite right though. His neck seams long for his body, and a little bumpy.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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I like the detail in the clothes and feathers. The proportion on the falcon doesn't seam quite right though. His neck seams long for his body, and a little bumpy.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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Thank you... sorry for not replying for so long been busy with work. saw ur comment on 22 apr...today
Comment from Storyweaver
Nice job, I like the rustic feel here.
The picture itself is very interesting...the face is a little rough but the bird is good! The position you have drawn is a hard one to maintain perspective...you did well!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
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Nice job, I like the rustic feel here.
The picture itself is very interesting...the face is a little rough but the bird is good! The position you have drawn is a hard one to maintain perspective...you did well!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
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thanx. the face i felt needed to be rough bcoz of the harsh climate of siberia from where the person is.
Comment from Luminae
For a sketch this is very good, and you did a nice job with the man's clothes and the natural way he's posing. I think the falcon could use a little work, though. Have you consider making a "cleaned up" version of this, maybe with more attention to detail?
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
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For a sketch this is very good, and you did a nice job with the man's clothes and the natural way he's posing. I think the falcon could use a little work, though. Have you consider making a "cleaned up" version of this, maybe with more attention to detail?
Comment Written 10-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
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thanx i'll think abt it
Comment from Tillantria
THIS HAS EXCELLENT POTENTIAL!!!
You need to take this sketch and turn into one of your own. Get a bigger piece of paper and work out another, more finished version to this.
~Tillie
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
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THIS HAS EXCELLENT POTENTIAL!!!
You need to take this sketch and turn into one of your own. Get a bigger piece of paper and work out another, more finished version to this.
~Tillie
Comment Written 10-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
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thanx. What do u mean by a more finished version? more detail or colour or?
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This looks like a sketch, right? Well take the sketch and rework it into a finished piece. That's my suggestion. ~Tillie
Comment from mfwilkie
This is good overall. I like the strength of his right leg and the positioning of his body. Where it falls down is the flatness of his left hand and arm. They are also not proportional to the rest of him. The positioning of the right foot if off as well.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
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This is good overall. I like the strength of his right leg and the positioning of his body. Where it falls down is the flatness of his left hand and arm. They are also not proportional to the rest of him. The positioning of the right foot if off as well.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
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thanx . will try to improve
Comment from timh
Amazing drawing! This is a great work and it actually looks real! It paints a great picture and actually looks like a falcno. Keep up the great work, Anand!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
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Amazing drawing! This is a great work and it actually looks real! It paints a great picture and actually looks like a falcno. Keep up the great work, Anand!
Comment Written 10-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
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thanx
Comment from Wolfdancer13
This is a great start to a well defined sketch in pencil. I absolutely love the detail you put into the shoes with the contrast of the pant leg. The rest is a fair representation outlining the figure of the trainer with the falcon resting on his arm, awaiting the contrasting strokes and detailed shading that will add dimensions and depth to your subjects.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
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This is a great start to a well defined sketch in pencil. I absolutely love the detail you put into the shoes with the contrast of the pant leg. The rest is a fair representation outlining the figure of the trainer with the falcon resting on his arm, awaiting the contrasting strokes and detailed shading that will add dimensions and depth to your subjects.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
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Thanx again..