Comment from Lucien van Oosten
On my screen it seems to be lacking focus, detail and clarity on the flowers. I like the angel of the shoot and the background to me needs to be more green in hue rather than black. I think a green would have complimented the rest of the image better.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2011

thyanks

Comment from joelise
Good initial impact. Great focus against the black background. Good color harmony. The tiny white flowers stand out well in there groups of white. The rings of flowers are the Center of interest. The flat little arrangement has its own beauty. Good composition, cropping and framing. Good technique, technical interest, and story telling potential. Good composition, cropping and story telling potential. Creativity in title, presentation and artist's notes.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011

Thank you so very much!

reply by joelise on 16-Jun-2011

You are very welcome, joelise

Comment from SammieK
Good focus and colour, composition is ok but it would pop more without the branch of leaves, these take away from the flower alittle.
Love the story behind this photo.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011

Thanks

Comment from my-ts10
Initial impact-5
Creativity-5 Very good eye.
Color harmony-5
Center of interest-5 I like your rule of thirds use here.
Technique-5 Good focus and subject sharpness.
Lighting-5 Very good.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011

Thank you so very much!

Comment from CzechM878
Hi there.
Nice initial impact.
Well framed or cropped.
Good focus and clarity.
Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2011

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2011

Thank you so very much!