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Viewing comments for Page 71 "The Apples"

A collection of food photography

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Never seen such shiny apples. I like the light here it creates a good shadow for the subject. The white works well but i am not sure about the composition, i generally find the rule of thirds aplied here would be more appealing. Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 28-Jun-2011

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reply by the artist on 28-Jun-2011
    You are right on about the rule of thirds. I appreciate your good review! Thank you.
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That is correct. And a tooth brush keeps the dentist away. LOL Your apples look great. I like the shadows and the white backdrop. They look nice and shiny and with lovely colors. Excellent use of light. Pin sharp as well. Think the balance would be better if you took a bit more off on the left side. Less centered always looks better. Still I like this very simple but effective composition.

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 Comment Written 28-Jun-2011

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reply by the artist on 28-Jun-2011
    Hindsight is always 20/20 - the rule of thirds here would have been good, thank you so much! Will go and see if I can do that now. Another's eye is always a great help. Thanks.

reply by the artist on 28-Jun-2011
    Did the change and I love it! Just wanted to say thanks!

reply by avmurray on 28-Jun-2011
    You are welcome.
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