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Aurora

The aurora borealis in my imagination

12 total reviews 
Comment from saffron_factor


Ms Paint? And just from imagination?
Great!
You have a vivid imagination.
The horse's body could do with some more work.
The light house lends a mysterious charm to the whole thing.
Wonderful!

 Comment Written 17-Apr-2004


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
    thanks
Comment from emotif


Guessing is a really good way to go, and mostly it works, except for the northern lights. This time it wasn't so good. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2004


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
    Thank you... sorry for not replying for so long been busy with work. saw ur comment on 22 apr...today
Comment from Whisper


I like the white outlines. The horses body is a little too long. Just so you know, the northern lights are in all colors, mostly green. You can see them "dance" in the sky and "slither" along really fast. It is a very beautiful sight, too bad you've never seen it.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2004


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
    Thank you... sorry for not replying for so long been busy with work. saw ur comment on 22 apr...today
Comment from stonesage


While I think this is a decent picture, it seems to be lacking something. Perhaps the hills are too simple, perhaps something should have been on them. Anyway, the aurora borealis is amazing to see and while I see you wrote that you have never seen them, this would have been more appropriately named constellation or something similar.
I do think the horse constellation part of the picture is done very well though.

 Comment Written 13-Apr-2004


reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
    Thank you... sorry for not replying for so long been busy with work. saw ur comment on 22 apr...today
Comment from pantherkatz


I guess that I have a completely different idea when I see "aurora borealis." I think that's what took away from it the most. It's a good picture, but I think that it doesn't have the sparkle that the real thing does. ~Jaimee~

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2004


reply by the author on 12-Apr-2004
    I Know..as i said i have never seen the aurora.. its just my imagination..
Comment from Storyweaver


Nice job! I like the white on black effect, just jumps right of the screen!
Would love to learn how to use MS paint better myself...this looks like it would be a blast to do! Nice work.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2004


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
    thanx... adobe photoshop and other software are great but dont give the freedom present in MS Paint.
    It is easiest with paint!!!
Comment from Luminae


The aurora borealis is supposed to be colorful and look like rippling waves or curtains isn't it? This actually reminds me more of an illustration of a constellation, but it's good in it's own right. The horse's body seems a little long, but I like the overall affect of the picture. (and considering the program you used, this is frickin' amazing!)

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2004


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
    thank u.. u see i have not seen aurora and this was my imagination with some mysticism added to it!
Comment from Wolfdancer13


A very enjoyable piece, Anand. You captured detail of lighting rather nicely with this negative of white on black It reminds me of the scratch board work we used to do to detail with the opposite affect of shading. This used to be one of my favorite mediums. It's kinda neat to know it is available in digital.

The hills and your backlight could have used a bit more detailing to enhance and bring out the lines.

You must really enjoy horses. They're quite difficult to master.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2004


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
    thanx. speaking of animals I have drawn a wolf(or some thing which resembles one) .I'll post it next. send me ur views.
Comment from Tillantria


Suggestion:
I would create more of a contrast with the land under your Aurora. Maybe add a hint of color because even at night there is still varying shades of color.

Compliment:
I have never, NEVER been able to draw anything in MS Paint. Good job! And keep up with it. I have seen people do some AMAZING things with it.

~Tillie

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 Comment Written 10-Apr-2004


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
    Thanx a lot.
Comment from mfwilkie


This is a great presentation. What loses the fifth star is the length of the horse's back and the under-developed face and legs. Check out how a real horse run's.

 Comment Written 10-Apr-2004


reply by the author on 10-Apr-2004
    Thanx man.