South Australia
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Comment from GaliaG
the same photo could be taken in Eilat, Israel
In fact I think I have a similar one, camel near the sea
good focus, colors and composition
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
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the same photo could be taken in Eilat, Israel
In fact I think I have a similar one, camel near the sea
good focus, colors and composition
Comment Written 02-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
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Thanks for your review, much appreciated.
Comment from Antipodean
A nice photo of a camel, in a rather un-desert like surrounding!! Focus good but am wondering if a little darkening might intensify the colours more.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
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A nice photo of a camel, in a rather un-desert like surrounding!! Focus good but am wondering if a little darkening might intensify the colours more.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
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Thanks very much for your feedback.
Comment from StudioDoerr
A whimsical, enchanting capture. It's as if the camel is done in, had it with all the hauling. Well framed, focus is good. The colors are a bit washed by the bright winter light. Overall a pleasure to view!
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
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A whimsical, enchanting capture. It's as if the camel is done in, had it with all the hauling. Well framed, focus is good. The colors are a bit washed by the bright winter light. Overall a pleasure to view!
Comment Written 01-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
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Thanks very much for your feedback.
Comment from EvaB
Colors are wonderful. Love the blue sea in the background. His head looks a tad soft and sand a tad bright, but I don't know that I'd mess with a shot this good.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
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Colors are wonderful. Love the blue sea in the background. His head looks a tad soft and sand a tad bright, but I don't know that I'd mess with a shot this good.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
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Thanks very much for your feedback.
Comment from Kigasaway
This is a very horizontal photo! I like the colors and the texture in the picture. Regarding the camel, it's head is right on the horizon line equal with the sea. So, it doesn't show quite as well as it could have if it was further up into the sea background or a little bit further down into the sand. I might also suggest experimenting with cropping it so that the camel (the subject) isn't in the middle third of the picture. It might give it a different perspective without the picture being divided into 3 parts (sand, camel, surf).
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
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This is a very horizontal photo! I like the colors and the texture in the picture. Regarding the camel, it's head is right on the horizon line equal with the sea. So, it doesn't show quite as well as it could have if it was further up into the sea background or a little bit further down into the sand. I might also suggest experimenting with cropping it so that the camel (the subject) isn't in the middle third of the picture. It might give it a different perspective without the picture being divided into 3 parts (sand, camel, surf).
Comment Written 01-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
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Thanks very much for your feedback. Will have a play and see if I can improve.
Comment from joelise
Good initial impact. Good focus and lighting. Good earthy color harmony. The patience of the camel quietly waiting for the next rider is the center of interest. Good composition, cropping and framing. Good technique, technical skill and story telling potential. Creativity in title, presentation and artist's notes.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
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Good initial impact. Good focus and lighting. Good earthy color harmony. The patience of the camel quietly waiting for the next rider is the center of interest. Good composition, cropping and framing. Good technique, technical skill and story telling potential. Creativity in title, presentation and artist's notes.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
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Thanks so much for your review.
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You are very welcome, joelise
Comment from Coldflyer
The head of the camel is soft. It looks like your POF (Point of Focus) is the blue covering. I would have re-focused and shot another one. Or another way would be to extend your DOF (Depth of Field) by shooting it over with a smaller f/stop. I like the blue of the water. You have good cropping with a good density, saturation and contrast. Very nice lighting. A real nice photograph.
Take care,
Cheers,
Bill
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
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The head of the camel is soft. It looks like your POF (Point of Focus) is the blue covering. I would have re-focused and shot another one. Or another way would be to extend your DOF (Depth of Field) by shooting it over with a smaller f/stop. I like the blue of the water. You have good cropping with a good density, saturation and contrast. Very nice lighting. A real nice photograph.
Take care,
Cheers,
Bill
Comment Written 01-Aug-2011
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2011
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Thanks so much for the feedback - will pay more attention to point of focus in future.