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Comment from Anne
Now I bet this would be fun but not so easy to do. I like the way you see the spray from the board. The way the water looks is great. An interesting picture.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2011
Now I bet this would be fun but not so easy to do. I like the way you see the spray from the board. The way the water looks is great. An interesting picture.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2011
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Thanks once again for your feedback. :) Mary
Comment from Cephus
Composition and sharpness are good and the colors are harmonious but rather bland as this is a subject that often abounds in color and and for a wind sufing image, the action is a bit on the dull side. I believe that a more highly cropped version of this image would have greater impact. I would also suggest aligning the horizon which has a substantial tilt.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2011
Composition and sharpness are good and the colors are harmonious but rather bland as this is a subject that often abounds in color and and for a wind sufing image, the action is a bit on the dull side. I believe that a more highly cropped version of this image would have greater impact. I would also suggest aligning the horizon which has a substantial tilt.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2011
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Thanks for your review, will have a look at straightening the horizon.
Comment from joelise
Good initial impact. Good focus, lighting and color harmony. The center of interest is the good capture of the surfer with spraying water around and the crashing wave. The horizon could be straightened. Photoshop and Picasa have tools for this. Nice composition, cropping and framing. Good technique, technical skill and story potential. Creativity in title and artist's notes.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2011
Good initial impact. Good focus, lighting and color harmony. The center of interest is the good capture of the surfer with spraying water around and the crashing wave. The horizon could be straightened. Photoshop and Picasa have tools for this. Nice composition, cropping and framing. Good technique, technical skill and story potential. Creativity in title and artist's notes.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2011
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Thanks so much for your positive review. Will see if I can fix the horizon.
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You are very welcome, joelise
Comment from peter
A good photo with a nice story. The focus is good and the colors are nice. The presentation is well chosen.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2011
A good photo with a nice story. The focus is good and the colors are nice. The presentation is well chosen.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2011
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Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from outsideMAN
I am not familiar with your other attempts at these kind of scenes. This shot is well focused and exposed but the horizon is not straight and level. This flaw is easily corrected using software though so you should be able to fix it pretty quickly!
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2011
I am not familiar with your other attempts at these kind of scenes. This shot is well focused and exposed but the horizon is not straight and level. This flaw is easily corrected using software though so you should be able to fix it pretty quickly!
Comment Written 05-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2011
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Thanks so much for your positve comments.
Comment from photobeat
another nice photo of yours mary, you timed it really well, colour and light balance are perfect and the details are sharp and clear. thanx for sharing, beny ")
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2011
another nice photo of yours mary, you timed it really well, colour and light balance are perfect and the details are sharp and clear. thanx for sharing, beny ")
Comment Written 05-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2011
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Thanks once again fo ryour positive review. :)
Comment from esgjag
Initial impact 5
Creativity of presentation 5
Color harmony 5
Technique 5
Story telling 5
Lighting 5
Tripod certainly work as clarity is very nice. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2011
Initial impact 5
Creativity of presentation 5
Color harmony 5
Technique 5
Story telling 5
Lighting 5
Tripod certainly work as clarity is very nice. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 05-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2011
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Thanks so much for your positive review.
Comment from Angelheart The First
this is a very,very good shot with crystal clear focus and clarity.Wonderful color,center of interest and technical executuion.
Great job doing this one.
It worked this time...
Angelheart :)
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2011
this is a very,very good shot with crystal clear focus and clarity.Wonderful color,center of interest and technical executuion.
Great job doing this one.
It worked this time...
Angelheart :)
Comment Written 05-Sep-2011
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2011
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Thank you so much for your positive review. :) Mary
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You are very welcome :)