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Comment from dejonga


I really enjoy this picture for some reason. It captures life. Nicely cropped, but wish there was more of a focal point. Maybe a slight blur focus edging would enhance a more dominant focal point. just my opinion. Thanks for sharing!

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 Comment Written 15-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 16-Oct-2011
    Thanks so much for your comments.
Comment from Mirchyk


Initial impact is Good
Storyline is Great
Color and Harmony is Good
Lighting is Very Good
Technique is Very Good

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2011
    Thanks so much for your feedback.
Comment from chickadee


Unique capture Mary and like the moss growing on the wheel gears! What once was a running machine is now a wonderful work of art with all the lovely colors mother nature has encased it with! Nice sharp focus with great framing! Nice find Mary!
/Chickadee

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2011
    Thanks so much appreciate your feedback. :) Mary
Comment from willie


Nice shot!
This is an interesting scene! I really like the look of it! Old machinery can be beautiful if you look at it right and it looks as if you did here! Good job!

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2011
    Thanks Willie appreciate your comments.
Comment from outsideMAN


The wheels of industry have certainly stopped here! I wonder what it did? Your photo has quite an eye catching frame filling composition. Focus and exposure are good providing the viewer with a fine experience of the colours and textures of decay. This shot is further confirmation that nature will eventually reclaim everything. Well don, very good photo!

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2011
    Thanks so much for your possitive feedback.
Comment from jesuel


what a great photo the color is great the detail is great excellent depth great lighting and really great subject matter fine work here

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2011
    Thanks so much for your review.
Comment from taylortia


Yep, i would of stopped to take a photograph of this.
love how you have caught the light on the centre cog, how it just catches the teeth.
great focus. love the whole shot.
wendy.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2011
    Thanks Wendy, appreciate your positive feedback.
Comment from G.P.Photography


This is a really neat shot! I love the look of it,with all the rust and moss. It realy shows how lod it is.Do you know what it is? It has nice composition and color,very nice ,well done!

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2011
    Thanks very much, have no idea what it is asked hubby and his response was its a "thingy-ma-jig" - so helpful.
Comment from Shakeadog


Good colours to this
very good angle
i really like the framing too
nice lighting
well thought out work
nice composition too
the old moss on it makes it come to life
well shot

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2011
    Thanks very much, appreciate your positive feedback :) Mary
Comment from joelise


Good initial impact. Good focus, lighting and color harmony. The aged machine no longer able to work is now offering a home to very small green plants. This is the center of interest. Good composition. Good technique, technical skill and story telling potential. Creativity in title.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2011
    Thanks very much appreciate your review.
reply by joelise on 14-Oct-2011
    you are very welcome, joelise