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Comment from chickadee


What a great capture Mary! Great timing of the duck drinking with nice vibrant natural colors and perfect focus! Nicely framed putting all the attention on the thirsty duck!! Like the lighting and the shadows and the foot is just adorable!! Great shooting! I can already see an improvement with this lovely shot!
/Chickadee

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2011
    Thanks very much appreciate your comments - not sure there is a marked improvement will see at the end of the 8 weeks :) Mary
reply by chickadee on 23-Oct-2011
    Give yourself some credit dear lady!!
Comment from willie


Nice shot!
This is really a neat scene! I like the way ducks doodle around the way they do! You caught her doing her thing! Good job!

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2011
    Thanks so much Willie for your comments :) Mary
Comment from outsideMAN


Got yourself a study in browns in this picture! Is that your shadow on the duck? This is the kind of mistake I sometimes make when shooting in bright sunlight. Another is shooting down onto the duck. Usually you get better photos if you get down near ground level, but chances are you will get wet and/or dirty. Are you up to that!

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    Thanks for the review, much appreciated.
Comment from taylortia


Nice work. such a cute shot.
is that your shadow lol.
slightly out of focus, but still a sweet shot.
good work. thanks for sharing.
wendy.
have fun on your course.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    Thanks Wendy for your feedback, don't think it is my shadow I was on bridge fair distance away. Cheers Mary
Comment from canon shooter


good lighting on the hen and the water. I think by cropping it my make more stunning since the duck is your POV. hat class are you taking?

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    Thanks so much - the course is Using an SLR Camera Programme - covers functions, lenses, composition, lighting, electronic flash, night photography, close-up and special effects. There are 2 workshops one Night Photography and the other one you take in a prop which can be a person. Cheers Mary
Comment from katsi


Impact: Good
Creativity: Good
Color: right and true
Technical excellence: the duck looks slightly fuzzy, but close to right-on
Center of interest: Not bad, however you might consider cropping your shot w/more space in FRONT of the duck, rather than behind, because that's the way he's facing. Gives a feeling of forward motion.
Storytelling opp's: you betcha!
Lighting: Good lighting on the head, which is the most important. Would've been nice to have all of him in sunlight, altho sometimes that's hard to get.

Good artist notes. Good eye and good catch!

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    Thanks so much for your feedback.
reply by katsi on 18-Oct-2011
    You're most welcome ...katsi...
Comment from joelise


Good initial impact. Good focus, lighting and color harmony. Even ducks get thirsty. Interesting view of the duck with it's head down and tail up and this is the center of interest. Good composition with sun, shadow, water and stones. Good technique, technical skill and story telling potential. Creativity in title.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    Thanks so much appreciate your feedback.
reply by joelise on 18-Oct-2011
    You are welcome, joelise
Comment from Anne


This is neat the way you caught her drinking like this. I like the way the light shines on the ground. I like the way you see the rings in the water where she is drinking. An excellent picture. I bet this will be a great course to take.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    Thanks Anne, the first session was great so hopefully will get a lot from the 8 weeks.
Comment from Blackjaxe47


Initial Impact is Good
Center of Interest is Good
Lighting is Good
Color Harmony is Good
Technique is Good
Storyline is Good

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    Thanks Ken, appreciate your feedback.
Comment from jesuel


what a great photo the color is great the detail is great excellent depth great lighting and really great subject matter fine work here

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2011


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    Thanks so much for your review.