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A senior thinking of her future options

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Great photo for this contest. The attitude of teenager can be very hard and this is one road that you don't want. Great in black and white. Good luck in the contest. Great shot.


 Comment Written 29-May-2012


reply by the artist on 31-May-2012
    thank you very much :0) As soon as i read the contest I said I have a perfect picture to enter. Well perfect for me...not that it is perfect...you can always improve a shot.
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I love B*W,the name is good,and so is the picture.If she is Melancholy then she is sad, and I don't think she is sad.Thinking of what to do tonight maybe.you have caught the eyes very nice,and her stance is good,relaxed and serine.Good luck in the contest.
Thank you for sharing.


 Comment Written 29-May-2012


reply by the artist on 31-May-2012
    thanks a lot for gthe feed back and thoughts. I think she looks kind of sad that school is over and its on to the real world. but she does also seem to have a bit of a hopefullness to her as well.

reply by jim shalom on 31-May-2012
    With out hope what do we live for.J.S
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This is interesting the way she is posed. I like the way her arms are hanging out from the bars. I like the expression too. Unusual way you have the bars I think the lighting is a little strong as part of her seems to be washed out.


 Comment Written 28-May-2012


reply by the artist on 31-May-2012
    I see what you mean about the lighting I will be playing with that some more for future uses.
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I know who you are! Welcome to the contest! I certainly do have compitition! This is an excellent photo. I love the tilt in it. Good luck in the contest!


 Comment Written 28-May-2012


reply by the artist on 31-May-2012
    Thanks :0) I like the tilt as well.
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i would love to hear her story...lol. the clarity is good. the angle of the shot is good. the cropping si good. the capture of the light is good. the cropping si good. overall good job.


 Comment Written 28-May-2012


reply by the artist on 31-May-2012
    That you for the comments and thoughts.
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A very interesting image ... one that conjures up as many scenarios as to the models thoughts as perhaps she has for her future. I really do hope that the image of her behind bars is not an omen! A interesting and provocative photograph that is beautifully composed. Well done and good luck in the competition.


 Comment Written 28-May-2012


reply by the artist on 31-May-2012
    I hope not either! lol I'm sure her parents feel the same way lol thank you for the great comments and thoughts.
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what a great photo i really like the black and white it really creates some great contrast and depth i also like the angle fine work here


 Comment Written 28-May-2012


reply by the artist on 31-May-2012
    Thank you very much for your input.
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Interesting image, I really like the conversion to black and white, it adds a dramatic feel to this work. A couple of minor detail to work through, your models skin seems to be a bit washed out, if that was the look you were trying to achieve, cool but it tends to pull your eye away from your subject. Perhaps just a tone down will give it balance. The other issue I have is that her right elbow may be cropped at the wrong location, see how you did the left one, the right needs to be taken more in or more out. The angle you shot this at is crazy good, very modern, very eye catching.


 Comment Written 28-May-2012


reply by the artist on 31-May-2012
    Thank you for all your helpful comments I will be playing with this image more and see what I come up with. It was one of my favorite shots from the day :0)
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