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table
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this one looks like football players with the referee there is alot of sense in this story you wrote and it is some thing diffrent and movement with clean drawing and good colours and details too, table.


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 22-Jul-2012
    again Maria thank you very much , this was the very first one i ever did and i think they improved as i did more
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How very cute! The illustration is adorable as is the story. I am sure your little grandaughter loved it!
Stacey


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 18-Jul-2012
    my early attempt to try to get her interested in soccer LOL (not sure it worked ) thank you very much of course , david

reply by Stacey Nagy on 18-Jul-2012
    You are very welcome!
    Stacey
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love this one dave, the way placed the story line around the drawing is well done and the blue colour is fantastic, well done indeed, beny ")


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 18-Jul-2012
    as always a really big thank you beny , so pleased that you like it
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This is an interesting description of a soccer field and game. Yes, I agree. Your illustrations did improve since this one. I am sure your granddaughter looked forward to your stories. Again, well done. Thanks for sharing. Sam


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 18-Jul-2012
    and again from me Sam another big thank you
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Thank god you left out the abusive father thats always here.
good little story,
busy little cat.
nice work David.
wendy.


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 18-Jul-2012
    lol oh yeah of course maybe i'll re-write it and show two fathers rilling around scraping with each other lol as always tho a big thank you Wendy
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You know, I admire people who can write stories and do thier own art work with it! this is really good. How come you don't go to the fanstory.com and enter these into it, you can post them and maybe be able to get them published if they are not already? just a thought. this is good


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 18-Jul-2012
    ah thank you khristy, no they havnt been published , the last four ive done are much better in that ny drawing skills have improved i guess , i had those printed into proper books myself , so that may not be abad idea so again thank you for that too , david
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have you had any luck selling any of these stories?..i know its a tough market and getting a publisher to pay attnetion is a bitch...i know..the story is good. the shading is good. the body forms is good. the facial expression is good. the blend of color is good. overall good job.


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 17-Jul-2012
    ah thanks Mark ive never raelly tried to get them published tho id naturally be thrilled but hey ho
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Oh so this is where it all began! I love the ref blowing his whistle with the red cheeks! I think you may have your proportions better these days - Harry looks enormous sitting there on the sidelines! He's nearly waist high to the men lol! Great fun though.


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 17-Jul-2012
    yeah just shows that iove never been naturally gifted just practice abd more practice , but as always thank you
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Ha, ha, ha, so funny and so whimsical. Even for adults! The magic whistle of the Man in Black! Priceless. I am sure your granddaughter just loved it! It seems to me that could be a book for more than one child. Ever tough of working a bit on it and turn this adventures into a childrens bock?


 Comment Written 17-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 17-Jul-2012
    well i guess i have but like so many things its the time since retiring there seems so many things i want to spend my time on , your always so kind and generous with your comments Cleo i really appriciate it

reply by cleo85 on 18-Jul-2012
    I understand. I have the same problem!
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