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Harry the Cat

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table
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i like this story very sweet for the children and how u chose the charactors with the expretion on their faces and that soft colours too great idea very clever of u ,technical excellence , well done table.


 Comment Written 22-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 22-Jul-2012
    again Maria you are always so generous with your reviews so thank you so much and im so pleased that you liked it , david
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see, you keep us wanting more! Now I have a couple of suggestions, the wording could be a little different, what I mean is you repeated yourself in 2 sentences, using the same wording and meaning. the "quickly" and "shocking". that would be the only changes I would make. I would have used the words only once. making the sentence more effetive in the story. Just a suggestion. Like for instance,"I couldn't help but notice the look on the man's face, it was very shocking!" and, " Just as quickly as the man let goed of me, it was all over with" the drawings are very good. I really like your stories.


 Comment Written 19-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 19-Jul-2012
    oh i couldnt agree with you more , ive thought for ages this needs re-writing and tightening up and your ldeas are really good so thanks for that Khristy as well as your review m regards david
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You boys just won't be told will you? You go to parties on your own and it only ends in embarrassment! I'm glad Harry escaped from the magician - goodness knows what would have happened if he'd waved his magic wand at him.
Delightful as always!


 Comment Written 19-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 19-Jul-2012
    ha ha who knows indeed and yes we just never learn do we , you girls always know best and whats good for us , thanks of course Chrissie too very good of you to review it
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another inresting page. the illustrations are good. good blend in color. the shading is good. evenly spaced nice. overall good job bro.


 Comment Written 19-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 19-Jul-2012
    this is one i should think of re-doing , the story isnt bad but wants tightening up an ny drawing has improved since i did it 4 yrs ago so its a big thank you bro for such a great review
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i love your little stories Pammy, you really should try and do one again now and see how they turn out, now that you have all this free time on your hands and all, not that I'm bitter or jelous in anyway whatosever he he xx


 Comment Written 19-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 19-Jul-2012
    ha ha of course not my dear of course not , its not all beer and skittles there is all that pressure of wondering what time i shoud actually get out of bed of a morning (i may even be doing this on a laptop half under the duvet (who knows ) with this one especailly your right it could stand to be redone , so who knows , ah life is but a dream , and your the star

reply by corrinas creations on 19-Jul-2012
    aww didums its a hard life is it not

reply by the artist on 19-Jul-2012
    if you only knew lol(has school finished now too) not easy for you young mums is it

reply by corrinas creations on 19-Jul-2012
    finishing Friday, bring it on lol have two weeks off in a week though so that should be good, I think we are going to have a little blow out and go away for a few days and find some sunshine, get away from this grim weather. Fingers crossed the summer hols wont be too much hardwork, famous last words...

reply by the artist on 19-Jul-2012
    oh yeah get some sun on yer , its what we all need right now isnt it , im fed up of this fake tan especially with all this rain, but what is a girl to do
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I was wondering what happened to Harry after being jerked out of the hat. Thanks for finishing it off. As usual, well done. Sam


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 19-Jul-2012
    no, thank you Sam for taking the time to read it and reviw it, but pleased that you enjoyed it too
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LOL...LOL...LOL....how funny. This is such a cute tale, I can just see you sitting down with your granddaughter and reading this story to her, and her just laughing and giggling.
Stacey


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 19-Jul-2012
    ah thank you Stacey , actually its quite a long but interesting story (not the Harry book ) but how and why i wrote them

reply by Stacey Nagy on 19-Jul-2012
    You are so welcome!
    Stacey
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lol. sneaky little puddie cat,
very big cat or is it a short fence lol,
good work again David,
bring em on.
wendy.


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 19-Jul-2012
    well spotted about the fence lol bit of both shortish fence biggish cat lol thank you of course too my friend
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Ha, ha, Cleo did see you anyway, but I guess you talk about a different Cleo. OK, don't worry, I won't tell her.[Sorry, I am not grown up, so I could not miss that pun.]
Everything good I said at the previous captures is true for this one. I just love the story. Go on with it!


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 18-Jul-2012
    ah its vertaully ended , Harry has to go back to his garden with his tail between his legs knowing Cleo was right again lol .we have three cats Cleo Louis and Harry Cleo is 17 and still going strong Harry is more like a dog than a cat , if he see,s my car coming he will run down the road so he is there as i get out of it to greet me LOL as ever of course Cleo thank you yet again

reply by cleo85 on 18-Jul-2012
    Yes I remember the three cats from the previous postings. Of curse Cleo is still going strong; it's the nature of Cleo-cats.

reply by the artist on 18-Jul-2012
    probabaly very true lol tho do you wish yu were 17 again lol ??

reply by cleo85 on 18-Jul-2012
    No, I would make all the same mistakes over. I do like the experience I have now. LOL
    [I don't know, how cat years count. If cat years would count similar to dog years she would be 117.]

reply by the artist on 18-Jul-2012
    oh wow she is getting to the limet ive heard of cats livng till 20 but thats rare i think, and me like you , not sure id want to go back , id certainly do somethings differently but on the whole ive been blessed id say

reply by cleo85 on 18-Jul-2012
    I am not sure about the count of cat years. Our Cleo, who lend me her name, got 19.

reply by the artist on 19-Jul-2012
    oh wow i was only thinking Cleo probably wasnt your real name , waht is you name and which would you prefer
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Tuning back in for the next instalment. Poor Harry! how dare the rabbit laugh at him. Thank you for letting us know what happened next. :)


 Comment Written 18-Jul-2012


reply by the artist on 18-Jul-2012
    it was just for you Helen lol , i did them initially for Emma my grandaughter when she was about 4/5 but now Max my grandson is five he enjoys them too and as they know Cleo Louis and Harry (our cats ) they love the stories , as ever of course Helen a really big thank you

reply by Happy Snappy on 18-Jul-2012
    Aww thank you! You are so kind. People like you make this site worth being on :) It's great that the cats were based on real life characters and not fictitious ones. Would have been even more special for your granddaughter.

reply by the artist on 18-Jul-2012
    yes it did and thanks again
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