Lisa
i used a photo from a magazine for inspiration6 total reviews
Comment from Charley
This is pretty good I would suggest you bring her eye out more. This will help express your drawing fully. Very good nice talent
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This is pretty good I would suggest you bring her eye out more. This will help express your drawing fully. Very good nice talent
Comment Written 04-May-2004
Comment from Goya
You seem to be lacking of skills.
This drawing is quite flat, and in no day it can belong to traditional art category.
Traditional art has the heritage of centuries and an artist have to earn it.
Cheers,
Goya.
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You seem to be lacking of skills.
This drawing is quite flat, and in no day it can belong to traditional art category.
Traditional art has the heritage of centuries and an artist have to earn it.
Cheers,
Goya.
Comment Written 04-May-2004
Comment from WickedLizzie
One of the better ones I've seen of yours so far. You've done a really nice job of getting the proportions of the face right, but the eye looks dead. Eyes need a little bit of shine to them or they look dead. Overall, nice drawing. :)
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One of the better ones I've seen of yours so far. You've done a really nice job of getting the proportions of the face right, but the eye looks dead. Eyes need a little bit of shine to them or they look dead. Overall, nice drawing. :)
Comment Written 26-Apr-2004
Comment from JATH
You have an excellent start here. The only reason I didn't give a 5 was that she seems to be missing an eye. The hair covers most of that area but in comparison to the visable eye, you should still be able to see some of the eyebrow and corner of that eye. Something that still can be corrected in a drawing such as this. Otherwise your proportion and execution are flawless.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2004
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You have an excellent start here. The only reason I didn't give a 5 was that she seems to be missing an eye. The hair covers most of that area but in comparison to the visable eye, you should still be able to see some of the eyebrow and corner of that eye. Something that still can be corrected in a drawing such as this. Otherwise your proportion and execution are flawless.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2004
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i tried to do that other eye but i couldnt make it look right so i just left it out!
Comment from emotif
Well, she is certainly very attractive, and like the way you have done the hair. The shading is better than the other one I saw. Best wishes.
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Well, she is certainly very attractive, and like the way you have done the hair. The shading is better than the other one I saw. Best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2004
Comment from cbirdine
I like the way the facial features have hard outlines which draws the eye immediately to the facial expression, whilst the hair and body are softer so that the overall picture is not too harsh. A good combination which makes the picture very appealing.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2004
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I like the way the facial features have hard outlines which draws the eye immediately to the facial expression, whilst the hair and body are softer so that the overall picture is not too harsh. A good combination which makes the picture very appealing.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2004
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thanx very much. im 17 and doing art in year 12 and i just wanted to see what people thought of my work as i am aiming for an A+ folio.
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I think you'll get your A - good work - keep it up