Comment from WickedLizzie
This is a good drawing, but it needs more shading if you're looking for a more realistic approach. I like the eyes, you did a nice job on them, but they need just a touch of highlight so they don't look "dead". You're off to a good start.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2004

Comment from Breda
Scool work, there is no black in the picture / only gray . But i love the eyes and the face aldo the nose is poor and the shadows look like some marks, badly done, pilow with crosing lines is too big.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2004

Comment from JATH
You have a great start here, bundy_chick. Fairly good positioning of the body but the arm seems to loose form towards the wrist. And the hand doesn't really resemble a hand. You did a nice job shading the forehead and under the lower eye. I think you could still use a gradual shading around the other areas so they don't look so much like spots. Nice job catching her expresssion.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2004

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reply by the author on 24-Apr-2004

im pretty terrible at shading and hands.. well i hate drawing them! i stated clearly at the start of the year to my teacher that i was NOT drawing people.. then i did! thanx for the comments ill takr them on board and keep practicing!

Comment from emotif
Is a pleasant sketch, nice pose, but wonder about her hair parting being a line, and wonder about the shading inside her elbow and on her shoulder, as this looks wrong to me. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2004