Comment from Lucien van Oosten
Lots of good line work in this rendering. Looks like a lot of feet and people laying on top of one another, what I would call a dog pile.
I do think that even with the nice flowing lines some more shading and creating more tonal variation are in order. Nice start needs to have more variation in the shading to add depth and give the rendering some more character and different areas of interest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

thank you

Comment from jesuel
What a great drawing the shading is superb the de sin is very creative and unique the detail is great as well beautiful work here

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

I suppose it is more a design, I am very design conscious, probably because at Art School I took design and learnt all the design methods- then at Art College, I took Sculpture, which made me very conscious of 3-D.. thank you so much..

Comment from Jairos
Great And Nice Drawings, Good initial impact, Very good Frame Good Detail clarity and Tones, Good Shapes, nice Depth , Well done , - jairos

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2014

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2014

thank you