Hero
A Hero and his wolf9 total reviews
Comment from saffron_factor
What lecture was it?
As you say, the quality is poor but the oncept is novel and inspires a dirge.
The wolf needs work and so does the whole sketch!
I too get bored redoing rough sketches.
But, i think on this one, u need to steel ur self and so the impossible!
this has great potential!
Pm me when u r done and ill re review it!
Aarthi Prakash
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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What lecture was it?
As you say, the quality is poor but the oncept is novel and inspires a dirge.
The wolf needs work and so does the whole sketch!
I too get bored redoing rough sketches.
But, i think on this one, u need to steel ur self and so the impossible!
this has great potential!
Pm me when u r done and ill re review it!
Aarthi Prakash
Comment Written 17-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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Thank you... sorry for not replying
Comment from emotif
The idea was good, the outline started out well, but you lost concentration, and actually you really didn't seem to want to go on with it anyway, or you would have added more. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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The idea was good, the outline started out well, but you lost concentration, and actually you really didn't seem to want to go on with it anyway, or you would have added more. Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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Thank you... sorry for not replying for so long been busy with work. saw ur comment on 22 apr...today
Comment from Whisper
I like the idea, a hero with his wolf. He seams like a gladiator. The wolf almost seams like a spirit guardian. I like it. Some of the detail is hard to see though.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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I like the idea, a hero with his wolf. He seams like a gladiator. The wolf almost seams like a spirit guardian. I like it. Some of the detail is hard to see though.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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something like that thanks
Comment from odor_of_frodo
It's a bit choppy and the wolf is,well, poorly drawn. You really should try to redo your drawings. If you redo this, PM me and I'll review it again.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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It's a bit choppy and the wolf is,well, poorly drawn. You really should try to redo your drawings. If you redo this, PM me and I'll review it again.
Comment Written 12-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2004
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Thank you... sorry for not replying for so long been busy with work. saw ur comment on 22 apr...today
Comment from Wolfdancer13
It is tough to compel oneself to be motivated to finish detailing at times with free-hand sketching. The rough sketch is a nice framework for a drawing that could be further masterfully detailed. If you look close, you can see you've started to refine with shading and contour such as the sword, his belt, his arm. If you were to invest more time, this could be fantastic.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2004
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It is tough to compel oneself to be motivated to finish detailing at times with free-hand sketching. The rough sketch is a nice framework for a drawing that could be further masterfully detailed. If you look close, you can see you've started to refine with shading and contour such as the sword, his belt, his arm. If you were to invest more time, this could be fantastic.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2004
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I tend to improve in subsequent drawings of different subjects rather than improve on the same sketch.
But since the overwhelming opinion is that i should try to improve this i'll try..
Thanx
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I have a hard time returning to my raw sketches as well, especially if alto of time is put into detailing. Usually, I take the wisdom of what is lacking into subsequent drawings.
Comment from Storyweaver
Parts of this are very well done and other parts are distorted and hard to see...
The proportion is a bit off and the facial features are rough, but it has great potential...keep drawing you have great potential too!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2004
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Parts of this are very well done and other parts are distorted and hard to see...
The proportion is a bit off and the facial features are rough, but it has great potential...keep drawing you have great potential too!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2004
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I tend to improve in subsequent drawings of different subjects rather than improve on the same sketch.
But since the overwhelming opinion is that i should try to improve this i'll try..
Thanx
Comment from timh
This is a great drawing but it could use a little work. Its hard to see the hero ans the back of the wolf. It takes away the quality of the work significantly. Keep up the work, Anand!
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2004
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This is a great drawing but it could use a little work. Its hard to see the hero ans the back of the wolf. It takes away the quality of the work significantly. Keep up the work, Anand!
Comment Written 11-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2004
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I tend to improve in subsequent drawings of different subjects rather than improve on the same sketch.
But since the overwhelming opinion is that i should try to improve this i'll try..
Thanx
Comment from Tillantria
I will up this rating when you post the newer version. From what I can tell about this one (it is not in the best of quality) is that it has an almost watercolor feel to it. I like the subject.
~Tillie
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2004
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I will up this rating when you post the newer version. From what I can tell about this one (it is not in the best of quality) is that it has an almost watercolor feel to it. I like the subject.
~Tillie
Comment Written 11-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2004
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Thanx u are very generous..
Comment from mfwilkie
This is worth the effort of a redo with attention given to developing the muscular tone of the hero and putting the top part of his body in proportion to the face. His left arm should be included but not necessarily well- defined as the misty quality might obscure it slightly. The wolf's mouth is a bit too overdone in that his snout is too small for his head size. I'd like to see what you can do with this.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2004
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This is worth the effort of a redo with attention given to developing the muscular tone of the hero and putting the top part of his body in proportion to the face. His left arm should be included but not necessarily well- defined as the misty quality might obscure it slightly. The wolf's mouth is a bit too overdone in that his snout is too small for his head size. I'd like to see what you can do with this.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2004
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2004
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Thanx any way man.. I'll try..