Comment from snowblaze
What fun!

I think the colors could be a bit more saturated --- I'm sure this was a colorful work! Also, I do question the inclusion of the car (?) and building in this shot.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2014

I appreciate your review. Please specify your critique. I do not understand it. A car is not included in the picture. This was taken in a small city park. In the background are greenery and another art display. I have to check, but I think the contest only permits minor adjustment The building is may distracting, but cloning it out would be against the contest rules. Cropping it would mean to crop part of the sculpture. I may be wrong, but prefer realistic colors. The sculpture has its original colors how far I remember, but I will look at the sculpture again if I have a chance. The sculpture could have been temporary for the Art at the Park show.
[As you surely know, I cannot change the post while the contest is still running even if I wanted.]

Comment from Marie REID
Beautiful day with good natural lighting. A few distractions behind the glass models. Well focused expressing the colours. Well done.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2014

Thank you very much for your kind review. I guess you mean building and the other display in the background. I am aware of the distractions. I need to check the rules, but I think the contest permits only minor adjustments. I have a version with a replaced background and I am thinking of replacing the current version after the contest ended.