Comment from shadopups
Hmmm, nice shading, composition, posing, lighting, technique, As usual you leave me wanting more. Do you draw from your imagination or do you use models?

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014

thank you so very very much i use models once again thank you so very much

Comment from Barb Baker
On initially looking at this piece I loved it. But as I examined it I think that the nose is a little off center don't you? Other than that I love the pose and overall composition of it.
I also think that the left arm and hand looking at the image is a little hard to figure out. I think the bottom of the arm is a little too manly.
It is an overall good portrait, but I think if those changes were made I it would be magnificent!
Thank you for the chance to view.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2014

thank you so very very much

Comment from nature rules
Initial impact /5
Creativity of presentation. /5
Color Harmony /6
Center of Interest /5
Technique /6
Lighting /4.5 I would like to see you real work. How do you copy your work to download onto a site? Is the shadow in the right that strong on your actual work?

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2014

thank you so very much it is lighter actually im not that good of a photographer once again thank you so very much

Comment from mamamary
Getting a bit risque here. I love her face. The one eye looks very sensual. I have a little problem with the proportions of the shoulders with the waist and hips. I'm not talking about breast size. Her right arm looks too large to me for some reason. That's just me though.

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 Comment Written 20-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014

thank you so very much

Comment from Geokat
Fantastic pencil work in this piece James. I think this is right up there with your best. Tremendous shading showing the curves and build of her body, with excellent lighting cascading down her side illuminating her hair and features.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014

thank you so very very much

Comment from Kenneth Dinkel
Very athletic and seductive work of art here. Great shading and color composition with that signature Jesuel style.

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014

thank you so very very much

Comment from Alveria
Beautiful color drawing. Great skin tone and highlights of the hair and skin. Sexy and pretty young woman with a fit and sexy body. Nicely framed with great initial impact. ~Alveria

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014

thank you so very much

Comment from LorrainePurviance
beautiful and technically outstanding. great pose, natural and alluring, good light and color wonderful job

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014

thank you so very very much

Comment from OLIVER.M
This is a new way that you have opted to do the shading from the one's you used to do before.The lines going across looks appealing and neat.Good clear image with proper light and shading.Background is attractive

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2014

thank you so very very much

Comment from some1sangel
I like the background. The colors mix well with your subject. The woman is well done. She's proportioned well and stands out with the blonde hair. Nice job on her facial features.

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2014

thank you so very very much