Abacus
A character IM animating for a anime film4 total reviews
Comment from Wolfdancer13
I like the look of your animation, Lotus. You have a unique flare with your confident lines of pencil work, animation with a potential to be quite affecting. I can almost see the movement of action in this.
The only element that detracted is it seems unfinished and undiscernable as to what exactly is being chomped down on. Your teeth are fantastic, your creature menacing.
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I like the look of your animation, Lotus. You have a unique flare with your confident lines of pencil work, animation with a potential to be quite affecting. I can almost see the movement of action in this.
The only element that detracted is it seems unfinished and undiscernable as to what exactly is being chomped down on. Your teeth are fantastic, your creature menacing.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2004
Comment from WickedLizzie
You have good, strong lines in this piece, but I can't help but wonder, what is coming out of his mouth? Is it an appendage or is it supposed to be smoke? Or is it behind his head? It's not clearly defined. I like his teeth though, you did a nice job on sketching out his head and face. Look forward to seeing more of your stuff.
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You have good, strong lines in this piece, but I can't help but wonder, what is coming out of his mouth? Is it an appendage or is it supposed to be smoke? Or is it behind his head? It's not clearly defined. I like his teeth though, you did a nice job on sketching out his head and face. Look forward to seeing more of your stuff.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2004
Comment from Anibalcollino
I think the neck is too strong thath give aspect of the beast to it, same way to the toots, the eye are good too, I can't understand wath is the hole back of the eye. I think you have to change his skin texture. You are creating a good, realy good beast.
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I think the neck is too strong thath give aspect of the beast to it, same way to the toots, the eye are good too, I can't understand wath is the hole back of the eye. I think you have to change his skin texture. You are creating a good, realy good beast.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2004
Comment from marymay
Very intense! I am such a fan of pencil sketches and this one got my attention. The teeth are way wicked and I would love to see the finished product! Very Nice!!
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Very intense! I am such a fan of pencil sketches and this one got my attention. The teeth are way wicked and I would love to see the finished product! Very Nice!!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2004
