Soaring
A drawing depicting a leaping Ballerina.21 total reviews
Comment from Neilnap773
a truly gorgeous piece of art work that depicts the elegance and beauty of dance. The shading is excellent and i particularly like the way the lighting has blended into the dark tones that subsequently gives this drawing a great depth to it.a stunning piece ,
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
a truly gorgeous piece of art work that depicts the elegance and beauty of dance. The shading is excellent and i particularly like the way the lighting has blended into the dark tones that subsequently gives this drawing a great depth to it.a stunning piece ,
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Neil, your review is wonderful, thank you.
Comment from a.samathasena
What a wonderful nice lovely art.Beautiful artistic scene and great entrance.Very Nice presentation.Dancer,fast flying occasion and dance,legs hands,amazing action cloths,dark b/g are gorgeous great and make a nice scene.I like this talent six work. Creativity color and all are excellent.Great job.Well Done.Thanks.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
What a wonderful nice lovely art.Beautiful artistic scene and great entrance.Very Nice presentation.Dancer,fast flying occasion and dance,legs hands,amazing action cloths,dark b/g are gorgeous great and make a nice scene.I like this talent six work. Creativity color and all are excellent.Great job.Well Done.Thanks.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Well, A., you are always an inspiration. We all, here at FAR, appreciate your generosity.
Comment from Ronnie McClune
To be honest, it took me a while to convince myself that this really was a drawing !! Finally I decided it was and became sorry that 5*s was the best I could do. Your shading is outstanding, particularly that vail. Movement,storytelling and composition within the frame are all exceptional. Good luck in the contest with this very worthy entry, I guess everyone else is battling for second place ! - Ronnie
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
To be honest, it took me a while to convince myself that this really was a drawing !! Finally I decided it was and became sorry that 5*s was the best I could do. Your shading is outstanding, particularly that vail. Movement,storytelling and composition within the frame are all exceptional. Good luck in the contest with this very worthy entry, I guess everyone else is battling for second place ! - Ronnie
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Ronnie, thank you, ever so much.
Comment from Life is but a dream.
Quite the unique entry into the contest, thinking outside of the box. At first glance I thought this to be a flower, and I suppose it is, a human flower showing beauty of human form.
For the feeling of soaring you have captured this well into a dynamic, however it lacks in a "place to go" and what this does to the viewer is causes us to hold our breath...the image to my eyes is tight and restrictive. The foot is embedded into the margin and is partially amputated, this gives a stiffness to the art.
The chiaroscuro effect is glorious, the source of light easily seen.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
Quite the unique entry into the contest, thinking outside of the box. At first glance I thought this to be a flower, and I suppose it is, a human flower showing beauty of human form.
For the feeling of soaring you have captured this well into a dynamic, however it lacks in a "place to go" and what this does to the viewer is causes us to hold our breath...the image to my eyes is tight and restrictive. The foot is embedded into the margin and is partially amputated, this gives a stiffness to the art.
The chiaroscuro effect is glorious, the source of light easily seen.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Yes, Amputation is something to worry about in a picture. I must have cropped it wrong. Thank you for your honesty in your reviewing.
Comment from GaliaG
Nice paint of the ballerina body and position, but the background is full of nice and the dancer is too bright
good luck with the contest and thanks for sharing
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
Nice paint of the ballerina body and position, but the background is full of nice and the dancer is too bright
good luck with the contest and thanks for sharing
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Galia, my dancer is lit up too bright. Thank you for pointing that out to me. I must be careful not to highlight to much.
Comment from memephotos
graceful flight .I like the subject ,the action ,the detail & how the light in your work high lights the floating fabric & body of the Ballerina .
medium good, subject frame ,light,story,presentation all good Thanks for a differant view on flight
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
graceful flight .I like the subject ,the action ,the detail & how the light in your work high lights the floating fabric & body of the Ballerina .
medium good, subject frame ,light,story,presentation all good Thanks for a differant view on flight
Comment Written 29-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Thank you for appreciating this different view on flight. Your review makes my heart glad.
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your welcome ( oh I relate did you see my version of Take OFF )
Comment from Dick Lee Shia
Aptly captured for the comp!
Graceful subject flying in the dead of the night!
Slim but flexible body.
Indeed a big leap for a woman.
Impressive b&w rendition. Excellent tonal range. Nice features & textures. Good lighting & framing. Thanks for sharing... Best of luck in the contest! Impressive entry. Potential voters choice...
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
Aptly captured for the comp!
Graceful subject flying in the dead of the night!
Slim but flexible body.
Indeed a big leap for a woman.
Impressive b&w rendition. Excellent tonal range. Nice features & textures. Good lighting & framing. Thanks for sharing... Best of luck in the contest! Impressive entry. Potential voters choice...
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Thank you so much Dick. You know so much about the importance of light.
Comment from A.A. RunningBrook
A Leaping Lady...A sexy siren in Flight...a heavenly dish of mashed potatoes with gravy...um mm a connoisseur of Delight. I would enjoy being entertained..a seeker of pleasure if you will...in awe and wonder my breath is still. poetry of motion..a leisure of art...blood...muscle...bone and sinew...an interlude to a prelude of dreams and chance...things that I never outgrew...chocolate. flowers. Romance. All this and so much more. who says that your soul cannot take flight while your feet remain upon the floor?
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
A Leaping Lady...A sexy siren in Flight...a heavenly dish of mashed potatoes with gravy...um mm a connoisseur of Delight. I would enjoy being entertained..a seeker of pleasure if you will...in awe and wonder my breath is still. poetry of motion..a leisure of art...blood...muscle...bone and sinew...an interlude to a prelude of dreams and chance...things that I never outgrew...chocolate. flowers. Romance. All this and so much more. who says that your soul cannot take flight while your feet remain upon the floor?
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Wonderful poem, excellent. Thank you.
Comment from Imaginos
As beautiful as the wind and as graceful as a flame. This is a wonderfully realistic and stunning depiction of a ballerina. Amazingly detailed and beautiful to look at.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
As beautiful as the wind and as graceful as a flame. This is a wonderfully realistic and stunning depiction of a ballerina. Amazingly detailed and beautiful to look at.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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I bow to your generosity, dear Imaginos. Thank you ever so much.
Comment from marthab063
You did an amazing job with this drawing. To tell you the truth when I first looked at this I thought it was a photo. It's so precise and the lighting is so good. Very creative for the contest as well. Great job and thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
You did an amazing job with this drawing. To tell you the truth when I first looked at this I thought it was a photo. It's so precise and the lighting is so good. Very creative for the contest as well. Great job and thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2016
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Well, Martha, your review came at just the right time. Your generosity has lifted my heart. Thank you.