Comment from Cephus
Not fond of the composition in this one. Not bothered by the subject moving out of the frame but find the amount of negative space to be some what excessive. If the color was more saturated and interesting, perhaps it would work.
The mid day sun also is less than ideal with its harsh shadows.
Good story telling.




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 Comment Written 30-May-2016

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reply by the author on 30-May-2016

thanks again

Comment from Amylea82
Good shot. Great capture of the clear water and nice view of a wonderful time. Thank you for sharing. Have a wonderful weekend.

 Comment Written 29-May-2016

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reply by the author on 29-May-2016

thanks so much again

Comment from Regina E.H-Ariel
Another nice shot of this stunning competition, must have been a lot of fun watching

stunning clear water like in the Caribbean ocean - nice composition, creating a smile - well framed, clear and sharp to show even the faces and the fun they have , excellent camera settings,
I think it is a nice contest entry, all the best of luck

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 29-May-2016

thanks so much again

reply by Regina E.H-Ariel on 29-May-2016

always a pleasure my friend

Comment from memephotos
oh I hope they where close to shore ..the colours of all subjects good .the movement is good .
the way that it is not to posed is a joy . frame works well thanks for a fun view

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 28-May-2016

many thanks again

reply by memephotos on 28-May-2016

your welcome

Comment from Jairos
Well Here the focus and clarity is good, nice and fun moment, the problem her is the frame, i think is a bit negative space the subject is ok, good effert Jairos

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 28-May-2016

many thanks again

Comment from Bethann66
This is an amusing photo. Everyone seems to be having fun in spite of the fact that they are sinking fast! The different shades of blue make a stunning background. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 28-May-2016

many thanks again

Comment from Lolly Cardinal
Fantastic rafting and joyful people. Waters are just clear, bright from purple to light green. Colors are awesome in this rafter and smiles are clear also. Detailed shadowed and centered properly. Magnificent happy people rafting and great eye viewer.
Thanks for showing.
Congratulations and Good Luck.
Have yourself a great Memorial Day week-end!

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 28-May-2016

thanks a lot lolly

Comment from dalebraatz
Very interesting first impression, It is 88DEg, out a would be fun to join in and cool off. Very good colors and details and depth have been captured here, Very pleasing to look at. Thank you for sharing and good luck. dale

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 28-May-2016

many thanks again

Comment from michiganmike
A very nice shot of the submerged raft. The rafters are shown in fine detail with great color. I like the action but think there is too much dead water at the bottom and I would crop it into a panorama. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 28-May-2016

thanks so much mike

Comment from MKFlood
cool capture. the clarity is great. the angle of the shot of the kids on the raft is great. the image is balanced and eye appealing to the viewer. good eye and great job overall.

 Comment Written 28-May-2016

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reply by the author on 28-May-2016

GREAT! the kids are over 30 year old;
thanks a lot

reply by MKFlood on 28-May-2016

I have children that age