Comment from stacey brooks 1969
A great cartoon in traditional art reading your notes and viewing this picture you have my attention in wondering what's going to happen next your drawing shows great detail and I love how you did her flashlight great work done here thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016

she Is suppose to post it by the end of this month..thanks the great review

Comment from FBI GUY
You get weird requests. I just get asked to use existing shots. The story line is a bit strange to start with let alone coming up with a illustration. The rats make the scene along with the wide eyed blond. Glad this in going into a song.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016

yes I do get unusual request but I do like a challenge..wink. thanks for the great review

Comment from rhondaloner
I love how you drew the light ...that is such a great perspective, unexpected. The scene is a little scary and dark but the drawing is light and colourful! Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016

thanks for the great review

Comment from a.samathasena
What a great nice wonderful rare art.Beautiful nice artistic scene.Presentation is great. Cemetery scene,her action,color gold hair,face eyes and color cloths,rats and color b/g and all are gorgeous great and make a nice scene.Light and color balance are great.I like this talent perfect work.Creativity color are excellent.Great job.Well Done.Thanks.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016

thanks for the greatreview

Comment from Imaginos
That's a pretty good idea for a story. And it looks like you've captured it rather nicely in the image. I love the little nod to Stephen King (Redrum!) on the tombstone. The people, the rats, and the tombstone... not to mention the mausoleum and the tree in the background are very nicely done.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016

thanks for the great review

Comment from drmerlin
I do love your illustrations. There is something slightly surreal about this one :-)

Great colours, lots of detail and different elements to tell the story and, as always, your humour show through.

Nice work. Thank you so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2016

thanks doc for the great review

Comment from LorrainePurviance
what a great interpretation of the request, I like the details and your treatment of the flashlight great job! I am sure your fanstory person is happy

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

many years of practice cranking out what the writers vision is. so far so good. no complaints..wink..lol. thanks for the great review

Comment from rasmine
This is outstanding Mark. I love it!! I love the way you did the trees and sky--didn't that take a long time? Love the 'redrum' on the tombstone!! Love the rats, and the mausoleum is awesome!
Hey thanks buddy :)
All I have to do is edit and then I'll post it. Tell me if you get scared :P

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

no it didn't take long..4 decades of my sharpies so you can say fog, brick leaves, etc..many many years of practice to where I wiz thru it fast. actually me going back over and over on the details that slows me down. I have illustrated for writers before and do keep myself out there for someone to notice but I have a couple of books that I have illustrated beforeare under belt to help my portfolio out..wink..glad ya like and thanks for the awesome review.

Comment from GaliaG
Is th light for finding the ghosts or for making then go away?

In any case, an excellent draw, as always

Good story telling

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

no just pointing the way for the girls behind her..thanks for the great review.

Comment from Chinojking7
Very wild imagination. But you have captured the story well with this piece. Love the rats. All over nice work. Adding the Redrum was perfect!!!

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 Comment Written 16-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

really I'm more of a illustrator than your traditional artist. writers throw at me whats in their minds and I take it from there..wink thanks for the great review

reply by Chinojking7 on 17-Aug-2016

Love it! I do day of the dead featuring nurses!!!

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2016

sounds like b grade movie..lol. that's ok I watch them too..im old horror, syfy and fantasy fan from way way back.wink