Loophole logo revised
for screenplay writer19 total reviews
Comment from Denise B
Now this one is really cool. Like the change of color in the text. I am thinking the light coming down almost seems as if Its shining down in a hole. The adds to the play on words I believe. Make the viewer guess what the play is about. Keeps up the interest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Now this one is really cool. Like the change of color in the text. I am thinking the light coming down almost seems as if Its shining down in a hole. The adds to the play on words I believe. Make the viewer guess what the play is about. Keeps up the interest.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the great review
Comment from cleo85
Looks as if this is even more serious now. Seems the guy has only two options, to stick his head into the sling or obey the girl. Maybe he could try to jump and put his feet into the loops, but that would probably break his ankles.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Looks as if this is even more serious now. Seems the guy has only two options, to stick his head into the sling or obey the girl. Maybe he could try to jump and put his feet into the loops, but that would probably break his ankles.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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lol..good thought..thanks for the great review.
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Mama Mia1
The guy is looking pretty scared checking out those loops in the logo. What a funny scene this is. You have added such a great expression to his face that it tells the whole story of what he is thinking. Great stuff.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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The guy is looking pretty scared checking out those loops in the logo. What a funny scene this is. You have added such a great expression to his face that it tells the whole story of what he is thinking. Great stuff.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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i would love to see what the details are on the screenplay. i understand he s trying use this as a tool to capture the producers eye to read it. thanks for the great review.
Comment from Envision
I think I like this one better. The nooses are great and I'm glad you kept them. I think the font colors work well. The expression on the guy's fate shows his worry and dread nicely!
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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I think I like this one better. The nooses are great and I'm glad you kept them. I think the font colors work well. The expression on the guy's fate shows his worry and dread nicely!
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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yeah the writer told me he has to think on it. so im not certain if he is pleased or he is talking to another artist. heck ya never know. thanks for the great review.
Comment from michiganmike
Here's a thought. Maybe the first two O's could have an embroidery or knitting look and the third one could have the noose. It might make some sense that way but it might not have the graphic impact.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Here's a thought. Maybe the first two O's could have an embroidery or knitting look and the third one could have the noose. It might make some sense that way but it might not have the graphic impact.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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well that would be cool but i have to go by the golden rule...yea who has the gold makes the rules. he ask for it this is what je gets..wink..lol. thanks for the great review.
Comment from GaliaG
If he does not want our head in the loop, who cares what he wants.....
another excellent story telling, composition and presentation
keep then coming and thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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If he does not want our head in the loop, who cares what he wants.....
another excellent story telling, composition and presentation
keep then coming and thanks for sharing
Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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thanks for the great review.
Comment from Dick Lee Shia
A well thought out rendition that's apt for rasmine's soon-to-be-published book!
You'll never run out of ideas and render them appropriately.
Should the title be plural too?
Is there only one loophole in the story?
Pointillist strokes always remind us that you're a meticulous, patient, persevering & determined cartoonist!
Visually appealing creation with selective coloring.
Red, yellow, blue!
Aesthetic spotlighting embracing a wide portion of the foreground!
Thanks for sharing...
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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A well thought out rendition that's apt for rasmine's soon-to-be-published book!
You'll never run out of ideas and render them appropriately.
Should the title be plural too?
Is there only one loophole in the story?
Pointillist strokes always remind us that you're a meticulous, patient, persevering & determined cartoonist!
Visually appealing creation with selective coloring.
Red, yellow, blue!
Aesthetic spotlighting embracing a wide portion of the foreground!
Thanks for sharing...
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Comment Written 13-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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its a comedy romance and besides the writer asked for it like this. wink. thanks for the great review.
Comment from rasmine
Yeah, it does. Wish I could pay you for your illustrations, Mark.
Maybe you could do one more and I could pay a little. Then I'll try real hard to publish and have it pay off. Just let me know. If you don't want to do it, please let me know. I know things have changed for you.
Good picture. I'm curious to the story know--is the author on FanStory?
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Yeah, it does. Wish I could pay you for your illustrations, Mark.
Maybe you could do one more and I could pay a little. Then I'll try real hard to publish and have it pay off. Just let me know. If you don't want to do it, please let me know. I know things have changed for you.
Good picture. I'm curious to the story know--is the author on FanStory?
Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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well ras lets see if we can get the book going. we both have investment in it..these other guys just want a pic to their work..our work is ours..wink. thanks for the awesome review.
Comment from El-mundo
Despite the uncertainty and story behind it, this is still a great drawing with basic features drawn accurately and definitely worth using for some kind of front cover/display/whatever the purpose is! artistically vibrant and accurate as always. :)
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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Despite the uncertainty and story behind it, this is still a great drawing with basic features drawn accurately and definitely worth using for some kind of front cover/display/whatever the purpose is! artistically vibrant and accurate as always. :)
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Comment Written 12-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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thanks for the great review.