The Apology
for a writer working on Funnie Flowers novel30 total reviews
Comment from paulah
Love how the blue jay has such a pleasant and pleased expression. The thumb's up touch of the flower personality is very nice use of color/petal with the perky red. You have a gift for just the right, simple detail.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Love how the blue jay has such a pleasant and pleased expression. The thumb's up touch of the flower personality is very nice use of color/petal with the perky red. You have a gift for just the right, simple detail.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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I'm a simple guy.wink.thanks for the great review
Comment from suzannethompson2
Excellent cartoon, Mark, and filled with your usual incredible detail. Love the expressions on the faces of the characters. I bet kids will love the stories. Excellent use of limited colours and great imagination. Suzanne
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Excellent cartoon, Mark, and filled with your usual incredible detail. Love the expressions on the faces of the characters. I bet kids will love the stories. Excellent use of limited colours and great imagination. Suzanne
Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the great review
Comment from Dick Lee Shia
To err is human;
To forgive is divine!
To ask for an apology is one of the most humble gestures a human being can show to his fellowmen.
A well thought out rendition depicting a good human trait as personified by this simple Aesop-inspired presentation.
Impressive superimpositions f these foliage.
Red, green, blue color combinations!
Well lit.
Nice ROT framing.
Sharply focused.
Thanks for sharing...
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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To err is human;
To forgive is divine!
To ask for an apology is one of the most humble gestures a human being can show to his fellowmen.
A well thought out rendition depicting a good human trait as personified by this simple Aesop-inspired presentation.
Impressive superimpositions f these foliage.
Red, green, blue color combinations!
Well lit.
Nice ROT framing.
Sharply focused.
Thanks for sharing...
Comment Written 16-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the great review
Comment from Denise B
I'm digging the headdress and touching of the hands/feathers. I like the way the super hero is almost camouflaged except for the cape. It fits with the character. Interest is always added by your background. Nice work as always.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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I'm digging the headdress and touching of the hands/feathers. I like the way the super hero is almost camouflaged except for the cape. It fits with the character. Interest is always added by your background. Nice work as always.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the great review
Comment from michiganmike
The knowledge that you may have transgressed and that an apology is in order is a lesson that politicians of all stripes have a hard time with. A very nice drawing with a lesson we try to teach our kids at an early age.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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The knowledge that you may have transgressed and that an apology is in order is a lesson that politicians of all stripes have a hard time with. A very nice drawing with a lesson we try to teach our kids at an early age.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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So true..wink..thanks for the great review
Comment from Envision
I really like the way you make your leaves in this series. They have such great texture and stand out so well. The superhero flower has good features and I like the expression in the bird's eye. It's turning out to be a nice children's story!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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I really like the way you make your leaves in this series. They have such great texture and stand out so well. The superhero flower has good features and I like the expression in the bird's eye. It's turning out to be a nice children's story!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the great review
Comment from Mi.Michigan
Very fun and cool Super Hero!
Colors - great contrast ... children will love this!
The apology - for children ... a good read to learn!
The background - flower leaves ... at different angles ... hum ... this is the child ... each one different, same and beautiful!
Apologizing to Jay ... with a smile ... this is well thought out - cool!
I love he Jay's eyes and beak ... clarity in form and "thought!"
Best wishes ... keep working on this book ... it will be good! ... for the children and us all!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Very fun and cool Super Hero!
Colors - great contrast ... children will love this!
The apology - for children ... a good read to learn!
The background - flower leaves ... at different angles ... hum ... this is the child ... each one different, same and beautiful!
Apologizing to Jay ... with a smile ... this is well thought out - cool!
I love he Jay's eyes and beak ... clarity in form and "thought!"
Best wishes ... keep working on this book ... it will be good! ... for the children and us all!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the great review
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You are very welcome!!! art filled w/imagination...:)
best to you!
Comment from memephotos
like the detail of the yellow vein on all the leave's & the way they are layered and fill the background .The hippy flower is cool the white petals flowing back & the head band . The red cap nice touch .The big blue chap with all the right curves . & lines , nice handshake .talented work Thanks
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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like the detail of the yellow vein on all the leave's & the way they are layered and fill the background .The hippy flower is cool the white petals flowing back & the head band . The red cap nice touch .The big blue chap with all the right curves . & lines , nice handshake .talented work Thanks
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the great review
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YES I am finally reconnected & your very welcome
Comment from El-mundo
Haha the plot thickens once more! now I've read the jist of the sequence it makes more sense.....still nonsense (in the best way possible!!) but more sense! great drawing accuracy and use of colour as always, consistent with the whole theme and story - I like the new characters that emerge and the brilliant creative twists in the whole saga. Keep 'em coming!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Haha the plot thickens once more! now I've read the jist of the sequence it makes more sense.....still nonsense (in the best way possible!!) but more sense! great drawing accuracy and use of colour as always, consistent with the whole theme and story - I like the new characters that emerge and the brilliant creative twists in the whole saga. Keep 'em coming!
Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2017
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Thanks for the great review
Comment from cleo85
I see, the teaching of yogi Golden Dragon-fly fell on fertile ground. Flower Power controls himself and seemingly won a friend. Every superhero need friends. I just hope Blue Jay will get some lessons too. If I remember right jay's have a temperament problem as well.
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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I see, the teaching of yogi Golden Dragon-fly fell on fertile ground. Flower Power controls himself and seemingly won a friend. Every superhero need friends. I just hope Blue Jay will get some lessons too. If I remember right jay's have a temperament problem as well.
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2017
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2017
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well we see where the story goes from there..she is finishing up the chapter and should post that one this weekend. thanks for the great review.
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My pleasure, always!