Comment from Paul the Wizard
Fun, the story is nice I feel like laughing out loud myself, great capture of the characters, very believable posses. i feel bad for the turkey flower, cause you know its getting it. ha ha ha

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Thanks for the great review

Comment from GaliaG
poor guy, too much sugar!!!

excellent story telling, composition, initial impact and presentation

a pleasure to review

thanks for sharing

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Thanks for the great review

Comment from Linda Wetzel
I love the holiday pageant story this piece tells. One cannot help but feel sorry for the poor daffodil that has to dress up like a turkey while his flower friends roll on the floor and laugh their butts off. Too cute!

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2017

Thanks for the great review