Comment from Joanna Bachman
The illustrative drawing,colors and composition in this work make the story;and,tell it,quite well. The flying arrows are,also, effective.
Cordially,
Joanna Bachman

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2018

Thanks for the great review

Comment from Renate-Bertodi
I am aware that you are running a particular story line, but this so reminded me of my children when they used to have their action men, in the back garden. You know, they lived their games, I would listen to them sometimes, and then my youngest, Joe, would draw his action pictures. He had piles of them. Those games drawn in simple forms! I like the way you have tied up your drawings with the same design leaves.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018

i did them same..thats part of fun playing then..kids today have video games...no imagination for the majority..however there are a few that i see that do have that imagination and joined our FAR family. glad to hear that your children had some healthy fun..wink. thanks for the great review.

Comment from mamamary
I love it. Your drawings are always so detailed. The leaves look real. The sky is blended well. The main characters are ready for battle. Do you do drawings for children's books? You would be so good at that.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018

i have done 2..1 was published titled "According To Granpa" by Eigle Rull. i think its still on Amazon.com...the 2nd was "Flower Power"(worlds 1st flower super hero).. by Rasmine...but that writer has not published it yet. other stuff in the past was lil spot ads ..you know local stuff.. i started going after the songwriters and musicians instead of the writers. after 20 videos it might pay off. this one that you reviewed will be the next video. Bryan Taylor is gonna release his new CD next year and wants to use our video collaboration as the promo. so im giving yall a sneak peak on this future video. wink. thanks for the great review.

reply by mamamary on 18-Dec-2018

Wow! I am impressed! Your work is valued and that means a lot. I hope you don't ever give it up.

reply by the author on 19-Dec-2018

Never..don't ever stop believing.. wink

Comment from jgrace
Nice bold colors that really get your attention. Your characters are well drawn. Well laid out illustration. Good imagination. Enjoyed viewing it.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018

thanks for the great review.

Comment from Mary Christman
Hope you don't miss your calling of being a story teller and illustrator! This is well done! And tells a great story!
I like the details you captured and also the humor in this creation! Great job!

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2018

yep i am that..just working on getting paid for it..wink..lol. thanks for the great review.

Comment from Gianna Rodriguez
A very creative idea. I can see this art in a children's book. As a person with a cartoonish style myself, your drawing really pops with movement and energy and such. Nice job

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018

Thanks for the great review

Comment from cleo85
Sure the bird-mice warriors will succeed Robin Mouse is especial experienced in shooting his arrows from the back of his devoted friend Captain Cardinal. This is a perfect story idea and a nice page in the book of The Victory over the Tree Rats. The colors are as perfect as the composition to hug the readers/viewers to the story.

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jul-2018

Had a couple writers act they were interested but that was all..I have a story line iny head..oh well maybe iil come back to that later and create a more detailed story..wink.. thanks for the great review

reply by cleo85 on 19-Jul-2018

You're most welcome. :o)

Comment from Monica Morrell
This is great! I love your design and creativity. Great use of eye catching colors.A pleasure to view. Fun and whimsical.
Great technique and presentation.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018

Thanks for the great review

Comment from suzannethompson2
Another great cartoon, Mark, and I love your story idea - why aren't you a writer? I'm sure you'd be great at that. Love the colours you used in this one and the detail, as always, is fantastic - those eyes and the claws are brilliant. Very imaginative work. Great composition. Suzanne

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018

No..I draw better than writing.. thanks for the great review

Comment from Miranda Langston
this is an absolutely adorable drawing. the wings on the cardinal are perfect and the mouse looks like he's about to shout "this isssss SPARTAAAA!!!!" hehe :D it's wonderful

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jul-2018

Lol..cool.. thanks for the great review