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Comment from Skiextreme2
Very well done with only one thing you should think about changing. If this image were taken from a spot more to the left, it would be close to perfect. The way it is now with the roadway above being centered makes the whole composure a bit too centered. One other thought is to crop the top and some of the right side, but I think that would make the image too crowded. Your works are great, but seem to almost always be centered.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2004
Very well done with only one thing you should think about changing. If this image were taken from a spot more to the left, it would be close to perfect. The way it is now with the roadway above being centered makes the whole composure a bit too centered. One other thought is to crop the top and some of the right side, but I think that would make the image too crowded. Your works are great, but seem to almost always be centered.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2004
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2004
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Thank you Ski!! Thought about cropping the road----------
Comment from LisaM
Hello again! I like reviewing your work because you are so excited about it and energized, plus you listen to suggestions given and seem to get better and better.. This is once again beautiful scenery good framing, focus, and composition.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2004
Hello again! I like reviewing your work because you are so excited about it and energized, plus you listen to suggestions given and seem to get better and better.. This is once again beautiful scenery good framing, focus, and composition.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2004
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2004
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Lisa, that is sooooooo sweet of you and I do listen because I am very excited about my photos. You know how much I value your opinions!!!!!!!!
Comment from Rahjahs
Sure looks like a fun house and area to hang out.... Great color, frameing, the fthe sharpness is a little soft, but, I'm sure its the upload quality..nice work, I'm sure this image would sell that house.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2004
Sure looks like a fun house and area to hang out.... Great color, frameing, the fthe sharpness is a little soft, but, I'm sure its the upload quality..nice work, I'm sure this image would sell that house.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2004
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2004
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Thank you very much Rah!!!!!!!!!!
Comment from efoto
This image was well done. I like the sharpness and clarity.
Initial impact 5
Creativity of presentation. 5
Color Harmony 5
Center of Interest 5
Technical Excellence 5
Technique 5
Story Telling Ability. 5
Lighting 5
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2004
This image was well done. I like the sharpness and clarity.
Initial impact 5
Creativity of presentation. 5
Color Harmony 5
Center of Interest 5
Technical Excellence 5
Technique 5
Story Telling Ability. 5
Lighting 5
Comment Written 17-Sep-2004
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2004
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Thank you efoto!!!!!!!!!!
Comment from gajnath
This is an excellent photograph of a beautiful house and landscape. I can see why this jumped out at you :) Excellent exposure, great clarity and wonderful colours. Just think road [path?] could have been cropped...I know it is in title, but a "Place of Serenty" would have worked :)
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2004
This is an excellent photograph of a beautiful house and landscape. I can see why this jumped out at you :) Excellent exposure, great clarity and wonderful colours. Just think road [path?] could have been cropped...I know it is in title, but a "Place of Serenty" would have worked :)
Comment Written 17-Sep-2004
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2004
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Thank you very much gaj!!!!!!! Yep, road gets mixed reviews and I do agree with why!!!!!
Comment from Clyde B.
This is a lovely hot Low, I like the composition and the lighting. The bright re against the green foliage draws the eye right into the scene. I've been looking at what is on the left, but just can't figure out what is . Great job!!!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2004
This is a lovely hot Low, I like the composition and the lighting. The bright re against the green foliage draws the eye right into the scene. I've been looking at what is on the left, but just can't figure out what is . Great job!!!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2004
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2004
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Thank you so much Clyde!!!!!! On the left, not shown, is like an old glassed in tiny porch that got some shot of, but could not get a good enough angle, too much railroad track and powerlines. Shown on the left beside the tree is lattice covering a window.
Comment from Papa
LowRider, yes a touch of heaven. A beautiful scene which you have recorded so very well. I admire the composition and your perspective, the colours are wonderful and the image carries a very strong and pleasing impact. The tepee is interesting! It is unfortunate that the image is not sharper; but it is an excellent effort.
Peace, Papa
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2004
LowRider, yes a touch of heaven. A beautiful scene which you have recorded so very well. I admire the composition and your perspective, the colours are wonderful and the image carries a very strong and pleasing impact. The tepee is interesting! It is unfortunate that the image is not sharper; but it is an excellent effort.
Peace, Papa
Comment Written 16-Sep-2004
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2004
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I appreciate you Papa!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment from Cricket
Great eye for a shot again, the only thing detracting from the piece is the framing. Think you could have cut out the road in the back to keep the focus on the home and surrounding area. The colors really pop with the red in there. Keep em coming!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2004
Great eye for a shot again, the only thing detracting from the piece is the framing. Think you could have cut out the road in the back to keep the focus on the home and surrounding area. The colors really pop with the red in there. Keep em coming!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2004
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2004
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Thank you Cricket!!! Yep, road getting mixed reviews!
Comment from badbitbucket
great exposure and clarity. good job LR!
Initial impact ..................... 5
Creativity of presentation..... 3 (average... just means it's been done before)
Center of Interest .............. 5
Technical Excellence ........ 4.5
Lighting ............................. 4.5 (could use a few shadows for texture and depth)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2004
great exposure and clarity. good job LR!
Initial impact ..................... 5
Creativity of presentation..... 3 (average... just means it's been done before)
Center of Interest .............. 5
Technical Excellence ........ 4.5
Lighting ............................. 4.5 (could use a few shadows for texture and depth)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2004
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2004
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Hey, thanks, badbit!!!!!!!! Always get excited about fivers from you!!!!!!!
Comment from mtdew_hawaii
Yes, this red house hidden by the trees does stand out. You captured another wonderful farm house. I like the lighting and angle. Keep them coming. :)
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2004
Yes, this red house hidden by the trees does stand out. You captured another wonderful farm house. I like the lighting and angle. Keep them coming. :)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2004
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2004
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Thank you mt!!!!!!!!