Comment from jnxsmommie
This is well done. Nicely framed. The focus seems a little off but I am giving you the benefit of the doubt that it is because of the upload. It isn't off by much but some. Great Work!

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 Comment Written 22-Sep-2004

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2004

Thank you so much jnxs!!!!!!!! Can always use a little, benefit of the doubt!!!!!!!!