A HandFul
Young Mother and First Child6 total reviews
Comment from astepbeyond
What a great idea. I hope you work this more. I imagine that this might be a sketch for a painting? It looks like a man's hands, is that the idea?
What a great idea. I hope you work this more. I imagine that this might be a sketch for a painting? It looks like a man's hands, is that the idea?
Comment Written 12-Jun-2004
Comment from Charley
Nice detail and I like the use of the hand for the fore ground nice
I think it needs something to bring it out a bit more though .
reply by the author on 04-May-2004
Nice detail and I like the use of the hand for the fore ground nice
I think it needs something to bring it out a bit more though .
Comment Written 04-May-2004
reply by the author on 04-May-2004
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Thanks for the feedback...I'll keep working on it...
Comment from WickedLizzie
Overall, I like the concept of this piece. The proportions are good, the hands especially, but the image is blurry so I feel like I am missing out on some really great details.
reply by the author on 04-May-2004
Overall, I like the concept of this piece. The proportions are good, the hands especially, but the image is blurry so I feel like I am missing out on some really great details.
Comment Written 04-May-2004
reply by the author on 04-May-2004
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Thanks, I will work on it...
Comment from idrawalot
i like the person in the hands, he thumbs could maybe use a bit of work though, but all in all, i dig it. I'dlike to see more.
reply by the author on 04-May-2004
i like the person in the hands, he thumbs could maybe use a bit of work though, but all in all, i dig it. I'dlike to see more.
Comment Written 04-May-2004
reply by the author on 04-May-2004
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Thank you,,, I will work on making some of the images more real...
Comment from Papa
cwncwn. I am sorry to say that I can't find anything at all appealing about this drawing of yours. It really seems to me to be poorly executed and even the concept I find to be maudlin. The abrupt line at the bottom and the darkness there suggests a carelessness never apparent in the other work of yours that I have seen here. Hope you won't be annoyed at me for this. I am wanting to be honest and mean my reviews to be constructive.
Peace, Papa
reply by the author on 04-May-2004
cwncwn. I am sorry to say that I can't find anything at all appealing about this drawing of yours. It really seems to me to be poorly executed and even the concept I find to be maudlin. The abrupt line at the bottom and the darkness there suggests a carelessness never apparent in the other work of yours that I have seen here. Hope you won't be annoyed at me for this. I am wanting to be honest and mean my reviews to be constructive.
Peace, Papa
Comment Written 04-May-2004
reply by the author on 04-May-2004
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It was a late night sketch...However there is something about it that brings me back to the drawing often...Every time I look at it, I see something diferent...Thanks.
Comment from Cricket
Interesting and thought provoking. Would like to see clearer lines though. Great imagination however. Good job. Thanks.
reply by the author on 04-May-2004
Interesting and thought provoking. Would like to see clearer lines though. Great imagination however. Good job. Thanks.
Comment Written 04-May-2004
reply by the author on 04-May-2004
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Thank you...Its all a work in progress...