Comment from Joluany
You have the technice down. but just a little to dark. Lighten up just a bit and it might be okay. good Job keep up the good work....

 Comment Written 13-May-2004

Comment from Casteel
Interesting idea, although the silhoette is not quite perfect the idea is. Maybe next sometime try adjusting the lighing just a little to one side and see if it makes a difference. :) Good Job...

 Comment Written 05-May-2004

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reply by the author on 05-May-2004

thanks for your help, i might try it.

Comment from Cricket
Good, keep working at it as I said before. Lots of trial and error with any form of art. And some "happens" and some just doesn't. Never know till you try!

 Comment Written 05-May-2004

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reply by the author on 05-May-2004

thanks for the encouragement

Comment from Papa
larkin445, this represents an imaginative and creative approach which I admire, but the potentially dramatic impact is lost, I think, because the darkness is over done. As well, it is most distracting that your name appears as part of the image.
Peace, Papa.

 Comment Written 04-May-2004

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reply by the author on 04-May-2004

Yeah my name is there because when we made websites at school the teacher told us to put them there, all the original photos dont have my name, but im not goin to resize them again just to get rid of the name, plz try ignore it.
thank you for your comment

Comment from Elle
Considering how you set up this shot, you've captured this shot very nicely and it seems to work. The darkness, if overwhelming a bit, adds to the mood. Thanks.

 Comment Written 04-May-2004

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reply by the author on 04-May-2004

thank you

Comment from cndnsnow
good photo... love the dark contrast displaying the subjects features. i like it, its just not a difficult shot to achieve. well done none the less. good job

 Comment Written 04-May-2004

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reply by the author on 04-May-2004

thanx