Comment from astepbeyond
I love the expression, and the use of blue to show anger is great! Practice drawing figures, hands and you will be a winner as a cartoonist!

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2004

Comment from Richard
THis drawing needs a lot of development. It has some emotion in it which makes me want to see more. I look forward to seeing more of your work.

 Comment Written 05-May-2004

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reply by the author on 05-May-2004

thank you for your comment. it is noted.

Comment from Holly M.
I liked this picture, the lines are crisp and the colors are nicely chosen-however, not sure what the scenerio of the piece is supposed to be-take care.

 Comment Written 05-May-2004

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reply by the author on 05-May-2004

this was an assignment. to pick a part of a movie and do 6 to 8 panels on a storyboard. i chose the scene where connie calls sonny and he leaves the house angry to go rescue her from her husband who had just beaten her. (from The Godfather movie) i did six panels. this one was the first.

Comment from Cricket
Know that feeling!!! You did a good job of capturing the emotion! Simple...kind of plain except for the emotion and too much blue. No color contrast.

 Comment Written 05-May-2004

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reply by the author on 05-May-2004

i chose to do my storyboard in monochomatic, in blue, using the outline for emphasis in black and dark tones of blue for contrast. thanks for your comments.

reply by the author on 05-May-2004

i chose to do the storyboard in monochromatic blue, using black outlines for emphasis and the darker blues for a contrast. thank you for your comments.