Titmouse and Chicadee
Viewing comments for Page 16 "Christmas Chick"These are small but fast birds
3 total reviews
Comment from shiloh106
Aw, he is so sweet.
Lovely color combination with his stark black and white against the Christmasy red and green. Nice font choice. Good composition. Good luck.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2011
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Aw, he is so sweet.
Lovely color combination with his stark black and white against the Christmasy red and green. Nice font choice. Good composition. Good luck.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2011
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Thank you so very much!
Comment from Anne
MUCH BETTER you can read it now.
This is beautiful the way you have done it. I like the way you have the bird and the pine needles in this. I like the way you have the red balls too. The way you did the background is great, I think this would look better if you had done the writing in a different color so it showed up better.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2011
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MUCH BETTER you can read it now.
This is beautiful the way you have done it. I like the way you have the bird and the pine needles in this. I like the way you have the red balls too. The way you did the background is great, I think this would look better if you had done the writing in a different color so it showed up better.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2011
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Thank you!
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Pleas take a look and see if this is better!
Comment from amfunny
I love the card and the composition, however the text is too small and is lost in the branches. Fix that and you will have a pretty card.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2011
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I love the card and the composition, however the text is too small and is lost in the branches. Fix that and you will have a pretty card.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2011
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Thank you!
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Please take a look and see if it is better now.
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Much better but I would raise it up a bit and to the left a bit and make it a size or two bigger.