Comment from bpellephoto
Hi MK.. Looks like another killer video for FAN story.

Excellent use of the one minute slot. The message is clear, the video action is well paced with the narrative.

Brilliant choice with the music it works perfectly with the creepy voice.

Well done... Bob

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

You had me chuckling about the creepy voice..lol. both Fanstory and myself thank you for the awesome review

Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
I'm in awe of your mastery , this intruiging and otherworldly video transports us to a world of breathtaking beauty. Every sentence is a masterpiece, brings the scene to life, enchanting hearts with its vivid realism. A testament your skill. Bravo! Here is my first SIX for you.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Thanks bro..glad you enjoyed it! Both Fanstory and myself thank you for the awesome review

Comment from Glena Jessee-King
Very interesting and inviting is the film. It is truly enticing for young artists and intriguing to older artists and storytellers as well as writers. Thanks for your continued advertising encouragement and reaching out to new customers/artists as well as encouraging the ones on FAR.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Thanks Glenda . Both Fanstory and myself thank you for the great review

reply by Glena Jessee-King on 22-Sep-2023

Welcome. And, indeed deserving, to you both.

Comment from Charlotte Morse
Good one Mark, you even got me wondering what story I could write!
I like the model, she plays it very well , is she a friend of yours? I also really like to steaming glass, how did you make it do that?
Charlotte

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Im an video editor and creator with access to millions of files. The video is wondershare filmora and the poster is that with Microsoft paint program. Audio is myself from cellphone..both Fanstory and myself thank you for the great review

reply by Charlotte Morse on 21-Sep-2023

You?re very welcome.
And thank you so much for the info.

reply by the author on 21-Sep-2023

Oh btw..did you know the video that announced you as recognized artist was created by me? Wink

Comment from helvi2
Good Heaven's Mark! You actually made me think of writing a poem for the Fan Story Halloween Contest! I already have an image I'm planning to post for the FAR Halloween contest here! Your poem was pretty good, just a slight bit out of meter, but I liked it. I like the gloomy depressed look of your subject! Looks like she's not quite sure if her strange love will be back on Halloween or not! I think the mood is super! Nice job of putting the right vibes together for the Halloween contest! :o) Nancy

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 Comment Written 17-Sep-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2023

Yeah I know I should have had you do the poem but I had to try..lol .Tom didn't complain..both Fanstory and myself thank you for the awesome review

reply by helvi2 on 22-Sep-2023

You did a great job with the poem! I'm glad you did wrote it! It really fit the image and the story you wanted to tell.
Nicely Done My Friend! Woooo Hooo! :o)