Comment from queenjoanie2
After making a few visits to yours an hers arts and following the scenes for both of you, I enjoy the song here by Ed and the message in his song makes your role here telling us this story, and yes, do tell. Wonderment is mystical and your graphics take us there and thru this story your telling us. The music aids us to engage!!! This song promotes movement, mystery thru past adventure during a specific era. But this song makes your ad-poster perfect choice. Go For It.


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 Comment Written 10-Jun-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2025

Glad you have enjoyed this and thanks for the awesome review

Comment from Alexandra Trovato 8
Hot Diggity Dog! This is cool!

The time, the Earth! That story teller. Awesome! Awesome!!

This is spectacular!!

Thank you for doing all of these truly integrates drawings. Ww have fans building and I need time to copy and paste the comments to you. They are inspiring. I already have book 2 in my mind when Kiera is the Queen of Dracada and transforms it but I digress ha

Two artists writing a story together ha
.I told Nancy Helvi2 here

It's like
ARTISTS UNITE TO WRITE!

Maybe that will make it to the marketing also. lol

The next chapter really takes off I'll send it ASAP. I call it

2139 Dracada

It's back in time but starts sharing the mysteries slowly.

I write better with art.

Peace,

Alex

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2025

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2025

Yeah kinda like the other side of the story that helps unravel the mystery. Don't worry about cut and paste it to me. I can and have viewed the reviews on the Fanstory side. So spend your valuable time on the story I stead. Glad to see your looking ahead because I'm also looking ahead have some cool ideas for the future story..wink. I'm think of using this as a header and use Microsoft paint to put a brief summary. Maybe a slogan like "When it comes to loved ones, seconds are priceless." Or maybe something you might think of. Let me know. Glad you have enjoyed this and thanks for the awesome review.

reply by Alexandra Trovato 8 on 11-Jun-2025

Of course awesome review for work! Hmm. They are traveling back so maybe to find answers and save a loved one, there are no limits to how far you'll travel.

Ha my family had all the pr and advertising people I'm just an idea person and some of my ideas just so happen to stink ha

But I get what you're saying.

If you can view my profile, draw for anything you want and we can create cool books. I have a llama crew kids poem I wanted to make into a picture book for instance and others. Make a list of what you might want to draw and I'll clean up the writing to match it.

As this story is getting more complicated I'm yeah trying to focus but it also comes to me visually like I see a story and write what I see.

I will send chapter 7 in a bit. It's almost done just want to get last lines right.

Alex

reply by the author on 11-Jun-2025

Well u got about a.couple dozen to reference..wink.

reply by Alexandra Trovato 8 on 11-Jun-2025

I'm fortunate to know you, friend!

I just made myself cry, writing something that reminded me of the last time I saw my mom in the hospital before she passes a month later. I was writing, crying, reading, crying. lol

Your collaborative partner is a moose

LOL

Alex