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Anti war collage

78 total reviews 
Comment from bongoman1


There's a typo in the author notes. Other than that, its an excellent mixed media picture. Your creativity and story telling ability are superb!? Well Done!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
    Thank you very much for your review and your input. Please I need help here since English is not my first language. What is a typo? If I made a spelling or grammar mistake I like to know what it is; so I could change it. I allways use spellcheck, but the check dos not work right all the time.
reply by bongoman1 on 05-Jan-2012
    An typo is an error. In the author notes, there is an error. "and or our children" it is below the picture in the author notes.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
    Thank you very much!!! I did not see it. I correct it right away.
    Cleo
Comment from webster


Wow- such a powerful and thought provoking piece. Good luck in the contest. Great entry. I wasn't sure about the barbed wire crossing the child's throat, but the more I thought about it, it makes sense- how war can choke the life out of so many. Nice job, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
    Thank you! I appreciate your review very much. You are right with the barbed wire.
Comment from bellamahri


The children are the reason we need to stop the wars!
This is a wonderful collage of the horrors of war and who is affect the most in silence.
Well done!
Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
    Thank you very much, I appreciate your review and I am honored by your high rating.
Comment from lyncia2005


Great story. I too often think about the innocent children of war.
Great composition.
Like the mixture of things going on here.
Good editing job.
Great piece of work!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
    Thank you! I appreciate your review very much.
Comment from butterfly77


You've captured all the agonies of war. The face on the little girl tells it all. I like the way you have incorporated the soldiers and explosion clouds.
Well done.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
    Thank you very much! I appreciate your review and I am honored by ypour high rating.
Comment from BurntOfferingsart


Powerful piece here Cleo . You send a message that has never been heeded through the years . Sad , but I give you credit for trying. very well executed work here

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
    Thank you very much. I keep trying.
Comment from PhotoVision


This is a very powerful image and if I had more than 5 stars available I would allocated them to this piece. The expression on the girl's face suits the theme beautifully, and she is well focused and lit. The other components of the collage fit very well together. An imaginative and well thought out piece of art. Very well done.

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
    I appreciate your tought of extra stars; but your review count more than any stars. Thank you!
Comment from Sorin Fota


Nice picture! Message is striking! The girl's angry is well sustained by the wire, the explosions and soldiers. I'm wondering what are the 5 silhouettes on the left: planes or crosses? Coloring very nice!

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
    Thank you very much. I appreciate your review. These are crosses. I have to change them a bit to make their function more clear. I attempted somthing between a human and a cross symbolic changing soldiers from life to death for the casualties of war.
Comment from bd shutterspeed


So very well done! I felt a total heart felt cry inside when I seen this. Your notes say in all and the picture melting into a collage of well crafted expressions. There is no glory. Great picture with great meaning Thanks so much for sharing.
Bev

 Comment Written 05-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
    Thank you Bev, I appreciate your review very much.
Comment from Shakeadog


A very good composed entry for the contest
wonderful details and ideas used
well executed
good placement and expression of the girl
well done and good luck

 Comment Written 04-Jan-2012


reply by the author on 05-Jan-2012
    Thank you, I appreciate your review and your wishes very much.