Comment from Brendaartwork18
This, I have to say, is a bit bland.. no punch. The scene is sleepy, I cant see what they are eating. The colours are natural but nothing is standing out. I looked on a larger screen and there is clear focus and a better appreciation of the whole. I think your angle could have improved this opportunity. The trunk also I appreciate gives a texture but it is a bit distracting. The subject of wild animals is good and you are so lucky to have this wild life nearby.

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

thank you;
wild animals in the wild: I cannot change the angle or tell them to change position,

reply by Brendaartwork18 on 25-Jan-2023

Of course but you 'might' do they sleep a lot? They do look full up.

Comment from seshadri_sreenivasan
I would't like to know what they found eat! It is lunch time here and I am hungry.And I don't want to lose it;:):) Sensuously, I find another one of your wild life pics that is natural and Interesting. Overall, this is interesting.

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2023

many thanks Sesha