Searching for Seeds
A simple color pencil drawing12 total reviews
Comment from lorac1
That is a very nice colored pencil drawing. Your technique seems excellent. The composition is lovely. The positions of the birds are fine. Your colors are soft and realistic.
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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That is a very nice colored pencil drawing. Your technique seems excellent. The composition is lovely. The positions of the birds are fine. Your colors are soft and realistic.
Comment Written 26-May-2010
reply by the author on 27-May-2010
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lorac 1,
thank you for your comments, appreciated.
Comment from GaliaG
Nice paint of this pigeons family on they day by day business
nice lines, colors, composition and presentation
good luick with the contest
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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Nice paint of this pigeons family on they day by day business
nice lines, colors, composition and presentation
good luick with the contest
Comment Written 26-May-2010
reply by the author on 26-May-2010
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GaliaG,
thank you for your time and the comments, all are appreciated.
Comment from Celia Claase
If you did this drawing while watching them in the park it is excellent! You got the proportions right. Nice composition too. The soft colours are nice too. Maybe adding a bit of highlights and shadows to create depth will make the picture even more appealing.
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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If you did this drawing while watching them in the park it is excellent! You got the proportions right. Nice composition too. The soft colours are nice too. Maybe adding a bit of highlights and shadows to create depth will make the picture even more appealing.
Comment Written 25-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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Celia Claase,
thank you for your time and comments.
Comment from estkay
i am a big fan of colored pencil and love to see artwork in this meduim. the drawing is very good and detailed and at the same time it is very simplistic. i like the muted colors. i think a build up of more color might have given it a more life-like effect, but the simplicity could have been the point. nice work
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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i am a big fan of colored pencil and love to see artwork in this meduim. the drawing is very good and detailed and at the same time it is very simplistic. i like the muted colors. i think a build up of more color might have given it a more life-like effect, but the simplicity could have been the point. nice work
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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estkay,
take another look, made an adjustment, thank you!
Comment from shiloh106
Pretty colors used for this.
Good composition.
Strong lines.
It just seems a bit dull, maybe it is just the upload.
Good storytelling/
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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Pretty colors used for this.
Good composition.
Strong lines.
It just seems a bit dull, maybe it is just the upload.
Good storytelling/
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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shiloh106,
made an adjustment, take another look please, thank you!
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It does look a lot richer now. :)
Comment from vipshehan-Nikon
Nice subject of the nature and I quite like the detail and the color tones. The story telling ability is good and it holds the attention of the viewer.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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Nice subject of the nature and I quite like the detail and the color tones. The story telling ability is good and it holds the attention of the viewer.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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vipshehan-Nikon.
thank you!
Comment from Panda chan
Very interesting pose of our threee feathered friends.Their colors contrast nicely with the yellowed dying grass. Since this was a colored pencil piece, I would have liked to have seen more vibrant colors.Also, it would have been nice to have had a little more details on the birds' feathers themselves.However, nice centering. Overall a nice job.
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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Very interesting pose of our threee feathered friends.Their colors contrast nicely with the yellowed dying grass. Since this was a colored pencil piece, I would have liked to have seen more vibrant colors.Also, it would have been nice to have had a little more details on the birds' feathers themselves.However, nice centering. Overall a nice job.
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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Panda chan,
take another look made an adjustment thank you!
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You are very welcome!I like the change!
Comment from jerry s.
nice drawing.shapes appear to be correct.for main subject.composition appears to be one dimensional and needs some sparkle to enliven it.what appears to be a background is mute and allows presentation of main subject.could be developed more.
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reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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nice drawing.shapes appear to be correct.for main subject.composition appears to be one dimensional and needs some sparkle to enliven it.what appears to be a background is mute and allows presentation of main subject.could be developed more.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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jerry s.
thank you!
Comment from nannybpurple
This is pretty and the colors used are nice all the tiny details in the feathers are good the red eye on the one bird shows good .
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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This is pretty and the colors used are nice all the tiny details in the feathers are good the red eye on the one bird shows good .
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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nannybpurple,
thank you!
Comment from PoeticHeart35
I like this drawing. It shows great character in the birds huddled closely together examining their meal. I love the colors used and the whole them setting, as well as the story telling.
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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I like this drawing. It shows great character in the birds huddled closely together examining their meal. I love the colors used and the whole them setting, as well as the story telling.
Comment Written 24-May-2010
reply by the author on 25-May-2010
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PoeticHeart35,
thank you pleased you like the drawing.